new dragons "OMG" please rate

[ijy101]

I made these in my spare time though actually I am quit fond of jeweled dragon I think it came out quite well so please rate.

 

[THEChanger]

First: Back to the field is not needed. Caplitalize Special Summon. I think Stand-by Phase should be capitalized, not sure. While this card is on the field, not when this card while this card. Treat all monsters on the field and in the Graveyard as Zombie-Type monsters. I think I got all of them. Effect is Over-powered, as there is no way to get rid of it that I can see. Also may be annoying for your opponent to only have Zombies. Though I do like the pic. For that, you get 4/10.

Second: Remember to capitalize the first word of new sentences. Need a max on the number of Jewel counters the dragon can have. Should be "If you use this effect," not "By using this effect,", I think. This card is also very Over-powered, though less so than the first. At least there's a drawback, abit a very small one to using it's effect. Again, a nice pic. Gets 5/10.

[.:Shaymin:.]

The pics are so overused

 

They dont have the fusion format

 

A Bit OP'ed

 

3/10 (cause I am cool like that)

[Guest se15fy]

my friend would love those.

[Nitro Death]

No Offense, but if you wanna get those good, change the pics, actually look at a Fusion card, and copy the basic effect and insert your cards. Post the lore please, lol i cant read the card. Vampric is way op'ed, 7 stars for 3700 ATK, and it gets Special Summoned at the End Phase it's destroyed?