Nightm@re-X Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 here it is :D(OCG FIXED!) please rate This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 monsters you control,including at least 1 Fiend-Type monster.If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard,during your next Standby Phase,you can pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your graveyard to your side of the field with extra 500 Attack Points.Once per turn,if this card would be destroyed and sent to the graveyard or would be removed from play,by paying 700 Life Points,Special Summon this card to your side of the field.If this card attacks,it cannot deal battle damage to your opponent except if you lower this card's Attack Points by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 fiend type should be Fiend- Type.sacrifice should be Tribute.you need caps on summoning things.Try looking at my card making tips for beginners. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 nice pic. errors r basically wut he pointed out ^^^. u should pm "DYLAN KARAM" FOR HELP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris kerr0 Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Lots of OCG errors but this is one of the best cards ive seen when you get it right contact me id love to send it to shonen jumpand a more original pic try photoshoping somthing thats what i do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 fiend type should be Fiend- Type.sacrifice should be Tribute.you need caps on summoning things.Try looking at my card making tips for beginners. Well thank you very much for the tip' date='but i already know that,i stayed all night yesterday fixing my OCG,but i couldn't find a time on this one....thanks anyways ^^!,ALSO can you give me the link to one of your cards please?i'd love to see it ^^[hr']Lots of OCG errors but this is one of the best cards ive seen when you get it right contact me id love to send it to shonen jumpand a more original pic try photoshoping somthing thats what i do What's photoshop?How to Photoshop?Is it illegal?Is it for free?Please send me a link to how to photoshop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 fiend type should be Fiend- Type.sacrifice should be Tribute.you need caps on summoning things.Try looking at my card making tips for beginners. what xion said lol but i absloutly love the pic for the pic alone ill give a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 fiend type should be Fiend- Type.sacrifice should be Tribute.you need caps on summoning things.Try looking at my card making tips for beginners. what xion said lol but i absloutly love the pic for the pic alone ill give a 7.5/10 Well thanks!But could you rate the whole card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 whole card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 whole card 8/10 thanks for the rating! but if you have time can you rate my first set? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-186939.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Picture: 10/10. Nice, I like the effects if it. OCG: 9/10. CAPITALS. Total: 9.5/10. Hot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Picture: 10/10. Nice' date=' I like the effects if it. OCG: 9/10. CAPITALS. Total: 9.5/10. Hot.[/quote'] Thanks!! can you point out the very little OCG error? please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Picture: 10/10. Nice' date=' I like the effects if it. OCG: 9/10. CAPITALS. Total: 9.5/10. Hot.[/quote'] Thanks!! can you point out the very little OCG error? please? First Sentence This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 monsters you control,including at least 1 Fiend-Type monster.If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard,during your next Standby Phase,you can pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your graveyard to your side of the field with extra 500 Attack Points.Once per turn,if this card would be destroyed and sent to the graveyard or would be removed from play,by paying 700 Life Points,Special Summon this card to your side of the field.If this card attacks,it cannot deal battle damage to your opponent except if you lower this card's Attack Points by 500. There must be a Space on the first line of the LORE. And in some Commas , you gotta space out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Come on people comment! please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNUKERx Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 i gota say its a well made card. ocg is really good,pic has good quality.i think this card may be abit overpowered but thats my opinion((((((((keep making cards))))))!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 i gota say its a well made card. ocg is really good' date='pic has good quality.i think this card may be abit overpowered but thats my opinion((((((((keep making cards))))))!!!!![/quote'] wth do you mean overpowered?-.-don't you see its hard to summon,has a big weaknessbut thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted April 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 seems pretty nice to me since it is a DARK/Fiend-type xD the pic is pretty nice and the effect it seems to work, I guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sasder47 Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 Doesnt seem much like a card belonging in AoC but still... 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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