Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Hi, I'm Theory. I've been watching this forum for a while, but I don't know if I can make good cards. So, I registered and made my first one, to see if you all like it! Please, rate in X/10, I saw that everybody does it here ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Some ocg errors, boring effect, Pic needs background and that don't looks like a reaper imo Good for your first card though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Point out the OCG errors, please? I think that this effect is pretty good for a "Reaper" and matches the name.Pic HAS a background.For me it does look a reaper. Thanks, anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonlord683 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Very cool, but I think there are some OCG errors =DOther than that good first card8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 ¬¬.Please, PLEASE, could you point out the OCG errors you found? Because just saying "OCG errors", won't help me improving.But thanks for rating it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 When this card is destroyed by battle by a monster with 1000 or more ATK than this card, destroy the attacking monster at the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Finally. Thank you, Aqua Master. Going to fix it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 ok Glad i could help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Lower the level, maybe? 5 stars with 1000 ATK? Seems kind of...meh...at best. 2 or 3 stars would be better for that kind of ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 1000 ATK and 1600 DEF. It would be too much for a Level 2/3 monster. And there is still the effect, which is very important.Don't know, but Level 5 seems enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Personally, I wouldn't use it if it required 1 tribute. But I guess that's whats makes it balanced. It is searchable with UFO Turtle, Sangan, and such so...idk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 This card is good as it is (except pic, dont like it)The effect makes up for it's ATK.8.5/10 if you change pic now 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 You dropped it 1.5 just because you don't like the picture? For me it's good, but I will try to look for a better one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Either lower the Level, or increase the number of monsters destroyed by this effect. Not original because I saw an effect like that before, I think the name of the card is Yomi Ship, and do the job better than this card. But still good for a first card dude. Keep going. ;] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 There are so many Yu-Gi-Oh! Cards that is really hard to make an effect that unique. Well, I tried. It seems to be not that good, but I guess I will improve soon. If I lower the Level to 4 is it ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Hi' date=' I'm Theory. I've been watching this forum for a while, but I don't know if I can make good cards. So, I registered and made my first one, to see if you all like it! Please, rate in X/10, I saw that everybody does it here ^^ [center'][/center] Humm, can't stand on it's own. However, the effect can compensate by getting rid of your opponents high-leveled monster. Unless he uses a decoy. OCG can use a bit of fixing, but I'm having trouble finding the spots. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Or you can just increase the number of monsters that this card destroys when it is destroyed. It is your choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 If there are still OCG errors, than it's not my fault, because AquaMaster has corrected it already, because my other one was even worse :/ Well, I guess that 7/10 is ok for a first card. I will lower the Level, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 OCG correct was wrong -.^ When this card is destroyed as a result of battle by a monster with 1000 or more ATK, destroy the attacking monster during your End Phase. Seems a little OP'ed. (Level 3?). 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I agree with what they said but on Aqua master's OCG fix it shouls be the end of the damage step and it need s more ATK or more destroyed monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Mr. WHAM, I understood absolutelly nothing you said. Thank you Rusty Shovel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 LOL When this card is destroyed by battle by a monster with 1000 or more ATK than this card' date=' [b']destroy the attacking monster at the End Phase. [/b] The bolded part should be at the end of the damage step. And your monsters attack sould be 1500 at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 No it doesn't need to be at the End of Damage Step. I wanted it to be End Phase, so it is End Phase. LOL² Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 xD. Though if I was to be very picky I would say: When this card is destroyed by battle by a monster with 1000 or more ATK than this card, destroy the attacking monster at the End Phase of the your next turn. I don't now... hmmm.... Great first card though :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 It has been corrected three times already, does anybody here actually knows the real OCG? ...Thanks, Rusty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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