B3lly N3rd Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 im sure you can read this im to lazy for a card lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Well, the lore help to fix the OCG errors, since we only have to edit the text and don't write it all over again. But I will rate it anyway:7/10 for OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 point out ocg errors..altho they dont matter when im rating cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 well, card is not capitalized, except when you said a Card Type, Like Spell Card, Monster Card, Trap Card, and so on. Hand is not capitalized as well. And you wrote opponent wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 damn english teacher..anyways ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Wow, nice cards friend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 spaces after periods.use one card in your opponents Graveyard should be activate/Summon one card in your opponents Graveyard.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 i expected worse responses thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 You dont capitalize hand. or card, only when u say Monster Card, or Spell Card, or Trap Card. Not when your just saying "card" Pic is ok except that writing in the middle. ok card really... 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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