My second card

[Theory]

Hey, Theory here. I made a new card. I just found this great picture and had to make a card of it. In my opinion, short and simple effects are MUCH better than long and complicated effects, and may, sometimes, be much more effective. Here it goes:

 

 

Well, I don't think it's as good as my first card, but let's see what you think.

 

[Rate in X/10, please]

[The Mad Hatter]

Nice,

I havent seen your first card so I don't know if it's as good,

But from what I see it was very well made,

The only thing I dislike is the pic,

It doesn't look very high quality,

9/10.

[Theory]

It was a bit smaller than the original card pic's size, so it is really a bit blurry. But thanks, anyway. I'm glad you liked it.

[Neoshadow155]

An ok card, but like you said pic IS a bit blurry.

Its OK, but im not really sure if it was real i would put it in my deck, but eh its OK

Overall: 7.8/10

[Theory]

It's blurry but it's good, in my opinion.

Thank you for rating.

[NeoDemonX]

The effect is cool but I see... wow I can't your OCG is to nice and the Pic is nice too so you get 9.8/10

[Theory]

OCG is nice? I was expecting errors :/. But it's good, why did I make a bad smile? ;)

Well, thank you I am glad I received a 9.8/10 from a 6 Level member.

[Rusty Shovel]

Your OCG fix:

 

During the Main Phase of the turn that this card is added from your Deck to your Hand, you may discard it to draw 2 cards. You can send this Face-Up card to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a Field Spell card and destroy it.

 

Overall it's ok. Unluckily I'm not a soft to the head high level, where I will actually rate your card. Hmm... Personally I would say 7/10, if you got a better picture that is.

 

Good job for your second card though.

 

-Rusty

[Theory]

Thanks for the OCG fix.

I'm glad my second card isn't bad ;)

I'll do my best in my next card.

Thanks again Rusty

[JIMMYTRON]

since i havent seen ur first either...this is pretty nice for a new member

 

8/10 ~Good Job!!

 

[align=right]Great Job Newbie,

JIMMYTRON[/align]

[Theory]

Thank you Jimmytron.

 

I have seen some people say BUMP, what does it mean? '-'

[Zeaux]

First effect is very original, maybe a little over powered, but still very original. Second effect is almost useless. To activate you first must have this card on the field, and it's a low leveled monster with a low ATK. Can't protect itself until your opponent activate the Field Spell. Could be good against Earthbound monsters thought. This card is way better than your first one. Nice job Theory.

 

Rate~

 

8.3/10

[JIMMYTRON]

BUMP= you post it to "BUMP" your thread to the top of the ordering...but dont do it too much bc it's flooding/spamming

[Theory]

Thanks. And yes, now I see it would be very hard to keep it on the field untill your opponent activates a Field Spell...

Well, I'm glad you liked it Zeaux. Thanks for rating ;)

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

Change "When this card is Drawn" to "When you draw this card".

 

Other than that, correct OCG.

 

I think you deserve 8/10

[Theory]

Just 1 error? Nice.

Thanks Merciful Idiot.

[Zeaux]

My OCG suggestion~

 

If you draw this card, you can discard it to draw 2 cards. If a Field Spell Card is activated, you can Tribute this card to destroy it.

 

Draw 2 more cards = more is not needed, and draw isn't capitalized.

[Theory]

It isn't capitalizated O_o.

Thanks for the correction, though.

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

When makes it less OP'd than If.

[Zeaux]

Not, draw is only capitalized in "Draw Phase".

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

What he's saying is, it isn't capitalized in the first place.

[Theory]

But I didn't type draw capitalizated; How confuse.