Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 I haven't made a card in a while, but my OCG's pretty good still. Enjoy. Activate this card when your opponent Summons a Fish, Sea Serpent, or WATER monster. Pay Life Points equal to the ATK of the Summoned monster and destroy it, then Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Fish, Sea Serpent, or WATER monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard, ignoring the summoning conditions. After this effect resolves, send this to your Graveyard(your opponent cannot Chain to this card). If your opponent activates a Spell Card during the same turn this card is sent to your Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Dolphin Token(WATER/Fish-Type/Level 4/ATK 1700/DEF 1500) during your next Standby Phase and equip it with this card. While this card is equipped to a Dolphin Token, your opponent must discard 1 card to activate a Spell Card, you must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Trap Card. Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack on a Dolphin Core Token you control. Destroy all monsters you control and decrease the ATK of the attacking monster by the Level of all monsters destroyed x200. If the attacking monster's ATK is negative during your opponent's Damage Step, draw 1 card and decrease your opponent's Life Points by the current ATK of the attacking monster. Credit:Both pics came from DeviantArt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Love Dolphins Flawless OCG 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Thanks, I have a support to it that I'll edit on to it right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Just two things: Tokens are written with quotations - "[insert name] Token(s)" Token stats are written like this: (Type/Attribute/Level/ATK/DEF) Other than that, awesome cards. I absolutely love dolphins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 awesome!!!!!!I love dolphins also.perfect, so 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Are you sure about the quatations; proof please. And I'll fix the order sometime, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 I like it.Some nitpicks. I believe it's ignore any summoning conditions but I could be wrong. Check Level Modulation.Also, you need a space before ()'s.Otherwise, these cards are awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Scapegoat - http://www.yugioh-cards.net/Merchant2/graphics/00000001/tp7/huge/TP7-EN009.jpgStatue of the Wicked - http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/thumb/2/2c/StatueoftheWickedDB2-EN-R-UE.jpg/400px-StatueoftheWickedDB2-EN-R-UE.jpgStray Lambs - http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/6/61/StrayLambsCP02-EN-C-UE.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Thanks, I'll change it sometime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 They're very well made but I do still see some real minor OCG errors. The pictures used are real amazing and yet match the card and effect pretty well. For your "Core of the Dolphin" card, monsters ATK can never go negative in the real YGO TCG; the lowest they'll ever get is zero so you might want to revise your card to for that. Yet the effects are quite amazing and well balanced. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Exactly what I was going for, it changes the entire rules of the game >:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Do you like my cards?and your are Exellent :) Please make your own post instead of posting them in another person's post. To be honest rating from an advanced person's perspective, they have lots of OCG errors and they're just pretty much vanillas or have real simple effects thus making them nothing more than useless. Also, crop/fix the pictures so the pictures don't look stretched out and/or squeezed in and the spell card should be an equip card instead of a quickplay card unless you're making it for a one turn use only then you got to include that into the effect. Overall, 3/10 only because the pictures are pretty good but due seem to be stretched out and include meaningless words in them like your Swamp Ruler, which has "Marvel.com" in the bottom right hand corner of the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 It's called spam, and it's not tolerated, understand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Do you like my cards?and your are Exellent :) Stp posting cards in other peoples threads Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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