first posted card, let me know what you think of it

[themaker18]

[Nightm@re-X]

underpowered,the pic -.-,ocg errors

3/10

[DeathSDelano]

A Note of Warning:

 

Don't Do DIvine Beasts or Fake-Types(alot of ppl don't like them in the realistic section)

 

Card itself:

 

Picture is decent(though i think its from a game)

OCG is pretty good

Effect: Last line is unneeded

 

rating : 7/10

But heres rewording for your effect:

When this card destroys you opponent's monster place 1 counter on this card. Increase this cards ATK and DEF x400 per counter on this card. You can remove -insert amount here of counters here- to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card.

[why me]

A Note of Warning:

 

Don't Do DIvine Beasts or Fake-Types(alot of ppl don't like them in the realistic section)

 

Card itself:

 

Picture is decent(though i think its from a game)

OCG is pretty good

Effect: Last line is unneeded

 

rating : 7/10

But heres rewording for your effect:

When this card destroys you opponent's monster place 1 counter on this card. Increase this cards ATK and DEF x400 per counter on this card. You can remove -insert amount here of counters here- to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card.

it is from a game. it's from the God of War video games. therefor it belongs in the pop culture section.

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A Note of Warning:

 

Don't Do DIvine Beasts or Fake-Types(alot of ppl don't like them in the realistic section)

 

Card itself:

 

Picture is decent(though i think its from a game)

OCG is pretty good

Effect: Last line is unneeded

 

rating : 7/10

But heres rewording for your effect:

When this card destroys you opponent's monster place 1 counter on this card. Increase this cards ATK and DEF x400 per counter on this card. You can remove -insert amount here of counters here- to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card.

it is from a game. it's from the God of War video games. therefor it belongs in the pop culture section.

(no raing till you put it in pop culture)

[FSBolthof]

Like they have already said. Keep it realistic and fix the ocg errors.