Brenton Curry Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 These is my first cards like this dont rate them to harshly they have feelings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Flavor text in a effect monster?Pic-okOCG-meheffects-Boringoverall=4.3/10you can do better I bet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crusard Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 No fake types. Erase "Ninja" and write "Warrior" or "Spellcaster". The effects doesn't make sense, but the pics are good. Rating is 46. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Flavor text in a effect monster?Pic-okOCG-meheffects-Boringoverall=4.3/10you can do better I bet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Flavor text in a effect monster?Pic-okOCG-meheffects-Boringoverall=4.3/10you can do better I bet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Picture: 8/10. The second picture is blurry though. OCG: 6/10. First no fake types. Ninja/Effect --> BAD it should be Warrior/Effect.. :)First effect: "Sacrafice 1 card on your field and this card can attack your opponents Life Points directly." 2nd: If their this isn't a proper effect then don't make it a effect. Make it an Vinilla card. Total: 7/10. Good for a first timer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Ninja is not a type Well the effect makes no sense 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 not much effort :/and effect monsters dont have descriptions, give it an effect or make it a normal monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daybreak Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 not much effort :/and effect monsters dont have descriptions' date=' give it an effect or make it a normal monster[/quote'] ^This... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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