Brimtosis Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Hello, YCM. This is my first realistic card in this forum, and I give the credit to Scyier for the picture. Well, here it is.[spoiler=The card][spoiler=the effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if there are 3 Machine-Type monsters on the field. Once per turn, Tribute 1 Machine-Type monster on the field. This card’s ATK becomes that card's Level X 500. If this card battles a monster with the following Attributes, it gains one of the following effects:WIND: This card can attack once again in a row.DARK: Increase this card's ATK by 250 points during damage calculation only.EARTH: If that card is in Defense Position, it is destroyed after damage calculation.If you use any of these effects, place one "Techno Counter" on this card (max 3). You remove all "Techno Counter's" from this card, to regain 200 Life Points for each counter removed. If you use this effect, this card is removed from play until the beginning of then next turn. R8, H8, be the G8 to my R8s. Enjoy. Okay, even though some of you might not want me to post another card on here, I have to anyway. This is a feild spell that can save a 'Techno' monster from destruction. [spoiler=Energy Of Confusion] It will probably need an OCG fix. Again, rate or hate. NEW CARD!! TECHNO MONSTER BIO-HARVESTER!!![spoiler=Techno Monster Bio-Harvester][spoiler=effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if you remove two 'Techno' monsters from play. This card's ATK is equal to the total Level of the removed from play monsters X500. If this card destroys a monster in battle, remove it from play. This card's ATK and DEF is raised by 300. For every monster this card destroys, your opponent must show you the top card of their Deck. If it isn't a monster card, remove it from play. If it is, Special Summon it to their side of the feild. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Not the beat OCG, But it works well against the Dragunities the best. Blackwings are weak against this. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Thank you, Jolta. Happily accepted. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 BUMP.Want to look at my card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Work on your caps.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 K. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Good OCG, picture is ok i suppose. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Thanks. :mrgreen:. Going to make the effect a bit better by adding the proper capitals.Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Well, the OCG could still use a little fixing. Let me see if I can help with that a bit. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if there are 3 Machine-Type monsters on the field. Once per turn, Tribute 1 Machine-Type monster on the field. This card’s ATK becomes that card's Level X 500. If this card battles a monster with the following Attributes, it gains one of the following effects:WIND: This card can attack once again in a row.DARK: Increase this card's ATK by 250 points during damage calculation only.EARTH: If that card is in Defense Position, it is destroyed after damage calculation.If you use any of these effects, place one "Techno Counter" on this card (max 3). You remove all "Techno Counter's" from this card, to regain 200 Life Points for each counter removed. If you use this effect, this card is removed from play until the beginning of then next turn. Whew...and there you are. The stuff in bold is so you can reference it for next time xD Overall, pretty cool card Lerahk. You get a 8/10 from me ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Thanks ChaosIncarn. :mrgreen: Does anyone else want to rate on my card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Good card,good ocg,good name9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Thank you. I realy like these ratings. I might make a set called 'Techno Resurection'. I'll put up a poll to see if you lot want it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zink Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Good OCG. Nice effect. Got a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Thanks.Any more rates? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Good Card9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Unoriginal name. And the effect is worded really...how should I put this...weird. It doesn't say if the ATK of the Tributed monster stay for the rest of the duel or only 'til the end of the turn. If it only stays until the end of the turn, it isn't overpowered, but if it does stay for the entire duel, it is op'ed. I think you should put that there to clear up any confusion. The last sentence or two is also worded weird. I think it should be something like:"You can remove all "Techno Counter's" from this card, to regain 200 Life Points for each counter removed. If you use this effect, this card is removed from play until the beginning of the next turn." However, I'm not sure if that is how it's supposed to be. The card is okay, not the best I've seen, but better than a lot of these cards from slightly new members (in terms of post I mean). Also, I don't see any errors really on the field spell, but attack isn't capped I don't think. I could be wrong, though. Also, the monster's image is decent and the field spell's image is...let me put it this way, it could be a lot better, it could be a lot worse. Decent cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thnak you, both. I will take this into acount. The effect is only for the turn, so you have to do it each turn so this card can have an ATK value. I know the picture is bad on the Feild spell, but I was searching for a warrior. It just came to me. I will make the changes. Even I'm not sure of the effect for the feild spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Bump. I see this is good. One vote, and the answer was yes. I will make more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 don't quite see why you made it support machines when it's a warrior type you should have said it's also treated as a machine type monster as well 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Thanks, I just thought that it would be apropriate to be just a warrior-type, so it is harder to be deffeted by effects that target the machines this card protects. Can be a real pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted February 28, 2010 Report Share Posted February 28, 2010 that is a sweat card but its effect is a bit confusing8.7/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted March 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 This isn't a necro-bump, cos a month hasn't gone by.Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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