Mephilis Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 This is my custom series of cards. The first card is this one.Tell me what you think, I will continue to load more as they come.Mephilis is a feline anthro that is a total enigma...he looks pretty normal but there is more to him than it seems.This is the Holy sword Xavior, with this, Mephilis becomes even more powerful, but he can merge himself with the weapon to take on his light form.In his light form, he is imune to magic balsicly, and can save his allies from death.This is Xora, the sword of darkness, with this Mephilis gains great attack. And like with the Xavior he can merge with it.This is his dark form, he can feel no phsyical pain, and for a cost can resist magic. He can also wipe out all of his enemies in one blow.One of Mephilis' great secrets..even more bizare than his affiliation to the legendary swords. Is Mephilis' dark Avatar form. With this card, he can transform into it.Thsi is Apocamare, this beast is very powerful and unrelenting. It can absorb the attack of his victims for a turn.This is my dream trap card, I love making people discard! So I could not help myself but make this. And I hate it when people just destroy my cards after I activate them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Okay, vanilla only post? Kewl. The pic is well, not wonderful but I guess it's okay... ULTIMATE EDDITION = If it's suppost to be realistic, make it LIMITED EDITION (with a gold sticker) or just nothing. Unknown Warrior is a fake type, so it wouldn't go here. The Set ID should be THMSE-EN001 Not much to say other then that since it's Normal. Hope you post some effect ones. On top of that, is this a Normal Monster set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I stopped reading at the vanilla's "Unknown Warrior" type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 VERY overpowered cards. I guess some are okay. Actually, no. OCG errors, the thought of it- saving your monsters from destruction, inflicting the most damage to your opponent as possible, ressurecting fallen allies-- is a very unoriginal concept. Thus so far I give it a 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephilis Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Okay I see now...I had no idea what to put in those places so I just made things up I will correct those errors.I see...I am not good with types but I will place them into the actual type slots, sorry for that too.These are rough drafts and subject to change, thank you for your criticisms, I will get on making them more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I love that you don't get mad at people for critisism. Didn't think these were cards-to-be-fixed. I will keep an eye on this set as you correct and add more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephilis Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Well I want them to belong with realist cards, so I will try to balance them out.Well I know that people on here know more about making cards than I do, so I take criticism as advice.Editing done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FSBolthof Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I like the concept and the pictures, although I don't like to only see the head of the first monster and I don't like it is black and white. Besides that, you are going to hear this a lott.THE OCG IS HORRIBLE!! Besides that sometimes I can't read the lore, past the text besides it.You get a 4.5/10, if you recover the bad OCG, you get 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephilis Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Ok, you will have to forgive my ignorance...what is OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Ok' date=' you will have to forgive my ignorance...what is OCG?[/quote'] Original Card Grammar, it's the grammar of the effects of your cards. If you don't mind, could you post the effects of the cards under them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 OCG is off, pics are ok, effects range from bad to ok. Posting the lore would help. Nice comments though xD. 6.7/10 -RS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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