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Magic deck *updated* Still working plz come!


Toshrio Hitsugaya

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Alrighty I glanced at the cards... Not bad.. Pictures 8/10. I am rating you diffrently because we got some work to do...

 

First card:

 

I know you didn't mean for any vinillas... So you should change it to an effect card..

 

Effect: Here are the issues you should fix in this card {When you change it to an effect card} -->

 

"This card can only be Normal Summoned if the card "Electric" is played. If so, this card may attack you opponents Life Points directly."

 

Second Card: I am sorry but I don't understand this cards effect... Can you explain it to me?

 

Third Card: You spelled "SPECIAL." Wrong... This is what the second sentence should be:

 

"If this card is destroyed in defence mode, send this card to the top of your deck." {It is very creative though 8) )

 

Fourth card: This card is not bad... Just you don't have to say "on "Karouko"" on the last part.

 

Fifth card: This card has no problems.

 

Total: 7.5/10. Not bad.. Your a good cardmaker man!

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