My First Card

[Dead Zone]

Effect: By discarding 1 Spell card from your hand, you can add 1 Temptress Counter (max. 3) to this card. You can remove any number of counters from this card to increase the ATK of this card equal to the number of counters removed x 100 until the End Phase. When this card is Tributed for a Synchro Summon, you can add 1 "Pitch-Black Power Stone" from your deck to your hand.

 

Help. Please and thank you.

[Dr. Percival Cox]

Wow i see barley any OCG errors 9.5/10

Incredible for a first card.

[Dead Zone]

Thank you :)

[The_Duck]

Same great job

[M.B X]

Well 1st nice card, you can go convert it here in my shop for 15 points. Anyway i'll give it a 5/10 because your new and as for the effect it's balanced but errors can be found in your OCG.

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-187877.html

[Dead Zone]

Thank you :)

[Shocked]

Many OCG errors. The pic is blurry

 

7/10

[Mr.WHAM]

For a first card...its BADASS 8/10

[ChaosIncarn]

o.o;; First card? Really?

 

9/10

[Brimtosis]

And' date=' by God if it didn't give me a little fright at first...

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This is awsome for a first card. It kicks the s*** out of my first card.

 

9/10

[Freeman The Master]

not bad... but attack and its effect is a little big for its star level. But for a first try not bad. 3/5

[emperor 217]

good work for first card

8/10

[thecross]

wow this is pretty good. srsly it beats the hell out my very first card. I just need to ask...Are u a veteran!?

P.S. rate 10/10

[Jolta]

Too incredible for a first card...

 

10/10

 

Since its a Spellcaster I guess it fits.

[PANDORUM™]

I can't make cards like this now, never mind my first cards T-T

[DDevil27]

i think its great but you made it kind of weak. Well , thats what i think :P

[Dead Zone]

Thanks everyone :)

[thecross]

No prob