My new card. 1st sky beast

[RM IS HERE]

I've taken all the advice i've been given and heres what i've got. I'll update every 3 days. please point out ocg errors if there are any.

 

 

here's the first update

 

[thecross]

can't see effect all that well but what i can see, ocg errors Wind attribute=WIND

don't know the rest

PM me if you need any help

8/10

[The_Duck]

I don't think there are any wind beast monsters. Only winged beast

[RM IS HERE]

can't see effect all that well but what i can see' date=' ocg errors Wind attribute=WIND

don't know the rest

PM me if you need any help

8/10

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thanks. can you get other people to see this card so that i can get their comments

[thecross]

can't see effect all that well but what i can see' date=' ocg errors Wind attribute=WIND

don't know the rest

PM me if you need any help

8/10

[/quote']

thanks. can you get other people to see this card so that i can get their comments

i'll try

[RM IS HERE]

I don't think there are any wind beast monsters. Only winged beast

opps thanks for pointing that out i'll update that right now.

[RM IS HERE]

I don't think there are any wind beast monsters. Only winged beast

opps thanks for pointing that out i'll update that right now.

all done

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can't see effect all that well but what i can see' date=' ocg errors Wind attribute=WIND

don't know the rest

PM me if you need any help

8/10

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thanks. can you get other people to see this card so that i can get their comments

i'll try

thanks and i've changed wind to WIND

[jabber2033]

I corrected a few things for you:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 Level 4 or higher WIND Winged-Beast-Type monsters. When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card' date=' you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect of that card and destroy it. You can only activate this effect once per Turn. If this card’s effect is activated, this card cannot attack this Turn.

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7/10. It'd be nice if that card had a background...

[RM IS HERE]

I corrected a few things for you:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 Level 4 or higher WIND Winged-Beast-Type monsters. When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card' date=' you can pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect of that card and destroy it. You can only activate this effect once per Turn. If this card’s effect is activated, this card cannot attack this Turn.

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7/10. It'd be nice if that card had a background...

thanks i'll make those changes right away

[bran2939]

well straight away i see a problem, its called sky beast and its winged-beast type..considering the pic it isnt sky beast its a mehc, so its 'machine'-type and change the name to sumin like sky mech....other than that 7/10

[thecross]

the card's way better now i'll give it a 9/10

[RM IS HERE]

the card's way better now i'll give it a 9/10

thanks