kira179 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 CONSTRUCTIVE criticism only please. Rate also ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoxedCrate Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I see no OCG errors! Since youre new, OCG means Official Card Grammar, if you didn't know. Only a couple errors. 1. Graveyary should be Graveyard. Typo(:2. "in it's card name." should be "in its card name." Just a small small error. 10/10! :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kira179 Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Oh, thanks. I have dyslexia, so I don't spell that well. I'll fix those minor errors now then. Thanks for the rate ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoxedCrate Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Your welcome, and for someone with dyslexia you spelled everything else correct o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kira179 Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Ok, here's the fixed product ^_^ Yeah, i had a dictionary up ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoxedCrate Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Okay cool(: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 err, welcome.seems a bit powerful considering there's many powerful cards with Dragon in their name. Guess the summoning Requirements make up for that. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 The ATK is a little powerful... considering you can summon ANY dragon you want after you summon it. But the Summoning drawback makes up for that! 70% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 The ATK is a little powerful... considering you can summon ANY dragon you want after you summon it. But the Summoning drawback makes up for that! 70% you basically repeated what i said -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 The ATK is a little powerful... considering you can summon ANY dragon you want after you summon it. But the Summoning drawback makes up for that! 70% you basically repeated what i said -.- Not exactly, i didnt even read your post ˚∆˚ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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