The_Prince_of_Death Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 This card s for my 6000th post celebration Please note that I haven't made cards in a long while.I made it for all those who hate cards with Stardust's effect, and want something like Beast King Barbados. [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing. If you do, its original ATK and DEF becomes 1900. You can Tribute 3 monsters to Tribute Summon this card. When you do, remove all cards your opponent controls from the field. When this card battles, any Battle Damage involving this card is halved. Image is from Facebook from the game Castle Age, which I'm addicted to.Please feel free to comment and rate it if you want. I'm not entirely sure about its OCG anyway... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Did you mean "Send to the Graveyard" or "Remove from play"? But I think it stops him either way. Odd. It's first two lines remind me of Barbaros. Actually, it pretty much is Barbaros. Works the same with Skill Drain. Except for it's 3 Tribute Summon part. I think. Eh. I'll let Griffin handle it.Congrats on 6000 Posts. I'm gonna reach ya soon. >D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 So... You got one of the best card's in Skill Drain, already practically broken one of the most interesting and versatile cards there is... then made the three tribute effect better. Then gave it a hell of a lot more support... then gave it more DEF?._.Was that really needed? I mean, Barb was nice, but did you really need to BREAK the card? Skill Drain was one thing, running some Dark Support for Fussy Dual-Mode, but now I can see DARK Skill Drain seriously taking some control ._....Hey, wait, this pretty much opens up a new Deck just by existing. Toning down the effect in a couple of places, and maybe cutting the level/attack and this could be a brilliant card because of the opportunities it gives. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I was think of adding a drawback effect on its ATK and DEF for efery time it attacked or was attacked it would lose 200 points in both ATK and DEF permanently. But yes, I basically based it off Beast King Barbados. I addend more to where it couldn't be special summoned...I'm just wondering how to add in the drawback effect, well exactly where would I put it....I have the ATK and DEF that high to resemble an army from Hell (of 6000 soldiers or something). I was thinking of adding the drawback effect instead of the half damage part...but I just wanted to get it out for everyone to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I'd drop it to 2800/2900 base ATK, 1700/1800 when Summoned without a tribute. That should do it fine IMO =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Don't think I see any OCG, actually... Pretty good idea, I don't like Stardust Dragon either but I use him >.< 9/10 also, remember me? I am Death Slash or adamandlogan. You were in the Dragonmaster's Club. Happy 6k posts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Don't think I see any OCG' date=' actually... Pretty good idea, I don't like Stardust Dragon either but I use him >.< 9/10 also, remember me? I am Death Slash or adamandlogan. You were in the Dragonmaster's Club. Happy 6k posts![/quote'] yeah I use him too, comes in handy at ocassions... Umm I do now that you told me. lol. Thanks. @Griffen: I'll think about it. first I'm just going to get over my cold before I do any editing to the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Pic is not that great (but you said it's from Castle Age, so it's fine :/). OCG is ok, and it's a bit broken. 6.9/10 -RS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest War Torn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Hum, I'll say it straight. Its OP'd in terms of ATK, DEF and Level. ATK and DEF > Level Also OCG seems acceptable, but I don't have time to fix it. 7/10 Nice try though Death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Raiden Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Whoa, an evil version of Beast King Barbaros. Playability/Balance: 8/10. Very good. I wouldn't mind this card in my macro monarch deck. Just like BKB, which is a balanced card mind you, and works for other decks as well as BKB decks. Maybe you could change the requirements for the effect (like removing three monsters on your field from play to special summon, and removing the special summoning restriction, or making it a "can only be special summoned by" card that can still be tribute summoned) to make the card more suited for it's deck. I would also make it a fiend, so that it can use fiend support, because fiends needs more guys like this anyway. Creativity: 7/10. Pretty good, but most monsters in yu-gi-oh are depicted as single monsters (versus armies) unless they get summoned from tokens, and the picture is kind of confusing; most monster pictures are meant to show the monster directly, rather than having a sort of mural of different things happening. If you changed the name of the card to be some kind of demon (like "demon knight of hades"), it might fit the theme more. Also, the card "Dark Ruler Ha Des" is supposed to be "Dark Ruler Hades", so maybe you could find a way to connect those two cards in the name. Overall: 7.5/10 Final Comment: I would totally use this card, but I kinda wished it fit the "remove from play" theme more. Also, don't change the effect/stats too much. This card is very well balanced as it is, and Beast King Barbaros is proof of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Congrats on your big 6k. As for the card...it's pretty much Barb all over again as most say...but eh, cool. Whoa' date=' an evil version of Beast King Barbaros. Playability/Balance: 8/10. Very good. I wouldn't mind this card in my macro monarch deck. Just like BKB, which is a balanced card mind you, and works for other decks as well as BKB decks. Maybe you could change the requirements for the effect (like removing three monsters on your field from play to special summon, and removing the special summoning restriction, or making it a "can only be special summoned by" card that can still be tribute summoned) to make the card more suited for it's deck. I would also make it a fiend, so that it can use fiend support, because fiends needs more guys like this anyway. Creativity: 7/10. Pretty good, but most monsters in yu-gi-oh are depicted as single monsters (versus armies) unless they get summoned from tokens, and the picture is kind of confusing; most monster pictures are meant to show the monster directly, rather than having a sort of mural of different things happening. If you changed the name of the card to be some kind of demon (like "demon knight of hades"), it might fit the theme more. Also, the card "Dark Ruler Ha Des" is supposed to be "Dark Ruler Hades", so maybe you could find a way to connect those two cards in the name. Overall: 7.5/10 Final Comment: I would totally use this card, but I kinda wished it fit the "remove from play" theme more. Also, don't change the effect/stats too much. This card is very well balanced as it is, and Beast King Barbaros is proof of that.[/quote'] What kind of noob leaves such an elaborate review?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest War Torn Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Congrats on your big 6k. As for the card...it's pretty much Barb all over again as most say...but eh' date=' cool. Whoa, an evil version of Beast King Barbaros. Playability/Balance: 8/10. Very good. I wouldn't mind this card in my macro monarch deck. Just like BKB, which is a balanced card mind you, and works for other decks as well as BKB decks. Maybe you could change the requirements for the effect (like removing three monsters on your field from play to special summon, and removing the special summoning restriction, or making it a "can only be special summoned by" card that can still be tribute summoned) to make the card more suited for it's deck. I would also make it a fiend, so that it can use fiend support, because fiends needs more guys like this anyway. Creativity: 7/10. Pretty good, but most monsters in yu-gi-oh are depicted as single monsters (versus armies) unless they get summoned from tokens, and the picture is kind of confusing; most monster pictures are meant to show the monster directly, rather than having a sort of mural of different things happening. If you changed the name of the card to be some kind of demon (like "demon knight of hades"), it might fit the theme more. Also, the card "Dark Ruler Ha Des" is supposed to be "Dark Ruler Hades", so maybe you could find a way to connect those two cards in the name. Overall: 7.5/10 Final Comment: I would totally use this card, but I kinda wished it fit the "remove from play" theme more. Also, don't change the effect/stats too much. This card is very well balanced as it is, and Beast King Barbaros is proof of that. What kind of newb leaves such an elaborate review?!?! A newb that belongs with people who respect newbs. Also a newb that must of made his own cards before joining YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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