TheMist123 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 "If this card survives face up in attack position for 3 turns in a row, it's attack power increases by 1,500. Once attack points are increased by its effect, this card may directly attack the opponent's life points every 3 turns. If destroyed by a magic or trap card, the owner of this card has the option of either gaining 1,000 life points or deducting 500 life points from the opponent and adding them to his/her life points. This card's attack and defense points cannot be increased or decreased by magic or trap cards or by effects." This is my first card, enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 OGC man...[spoiler=[b]OCG Corrections[/b]]"As long as this card is face-up on the field, each Stand-by Phase, place 1 Counter on this card, you can remove 3 Counters from this card to increase this card's ATK by 1500. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly when this effect is activated. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card you can increase your Life Points by 1000 OR you can decrease 1 of your opponent's monsters ATK by 500 and increase his/her Life Points by 500. This card's attack cannot be increased or decreased by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card.Or at least i think thats it...As you can tell it had to be completely redone! Picture and name are cool and for your first card it seems cool enuff. But try decreasing the DEF a little... its Spell, not Magic 60% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMist123 Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 what does OCG mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 It means original card grammar, which means the actual words and terminology they would use on real Yu-gi-oh Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Was first going to correct OCG then noticed it had been done. Then read the conversation and LOL'ed xD. 4/10. Pretty good card for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMist123 Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Was first going to correct OCG then noticed it had been done. Then read the conversation and LOL'ed xD. 4/10. Pretty good card for a new member. hah thanks im gonna make a new one and try to do better OCG :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDevil27 Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Nice idea at all but OCG 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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