New Card Set: Phoenixes of the Element

[kira179]

Ok, this is my second set of cards. Constructive criticism only. Rate, comment, and enjoy! (<---Hopefully that one too ^_^)

 

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "The Calling of Flames". Once per turn, you may discard 1 card from your hand the the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from your Graveyard or discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to select 1 "Phoenix" monster that was remove from play and add it to your hand.

Lore: Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up "Phoenix" monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, the monster gains 1000 ATK. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

[Brimtosis]

Glyph of flames:

'This card can only be equiped to a "Phoenix" monster.'

 

All monsters except for the following;

Phoenix of the vail

Phoenix of the Ressurection Flare:

 

The not-listed monsters do not need the 'by this card's effect'.

 

Phoenix of the Ressurection Flare:

There is no removed from play zone. I think it should be:

'... or discard 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to return 1 "Phoenix" monster that has been removed from play back to your hand.'

 

These are good cards, especialy for targeting the opposite attributes or attribute based decks.

 

7/10 purely for OCG errors throughout most cards. But still good.

[kira179]

Thanks for correcting me on those. i am still new to this, so i wasnt sure about those aspect. thanks for the good rate ^_^

 

~FIXED~

[Brimtosis]

No Problem

[kira179]

These are some more cards i have now added to the collection. there may be more, maybe not, so just keep an eye on this....

 

Lore: As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your oppentent's side of the field every time a "Phoenix" monster is Special Summoned. (Any card targeted by this card's effect cannot be activated in response to this card effect.)

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 "Phoenix" monsters on your side of the field and removing 2 from your graveyard from play, all with with different attributes except DARK. This card's attribute is treated as FIRE, WIND, WATER, EARTH, and LIGHT. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle by any monster sharing this card's attribute and is uneffected by Spell and Trap Cards during the Battle Phase only. (Errors may be present)

[ragnarok1945]

it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast for the type

 

though all the other OCG looks right

 

I see nothing imbalanced about these cards, so the whole set rightfully deserves a 9.6/10

[kira179]

Oh, wow. Im suprised its taken this long for someone to point that out to me ^_^ thanks. Thanks for the awesome rate ^_^

[kira179]

Bump...

[RAEGING D0GKING]

The OCG seems fine.

The cards arent OP or UP so I like them.

9.2/10