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1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, you may add 1 Nuclear Fusion Counter on 1 face-up card on your opponent's side of the field. You may remove 1 Nuclear Fusion Counter from 1 card to destroy that card. For each face-up DARK monster on the field, this card gains 300 ATK.

 

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1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, you can put 1 Nuclear Fusion Counter on 1 face-up card your opponent controls. You can remove 1 Nuclear Fusion Counter from 1 card to destroy that card. This card gains 300 ATK for each face-up DARK monster on the field. (that change is optional, I think).

 

Those are the basic changes I would make. Other than that, I think the card's a tad OPed. First, the card implies that you can put a Nuclear Fusion Counter on a monster and remove that counter on the same turn; I think you're gonna have to make that a choice. Also, you might want to make it so you need more than one counter to destroy a card. You could, though, use the counters to have multiple consequences. Perhaps you can remove 1 counter to send the card back to your opponent's hand, 2 to return it to the deck, 3 to send it to the Graveyard, and (maybe) 4 to remove it from play.

 

Also, you might want to consider cranking down the ATK a little. Since Utsuho is a DARK monster herself, she already gains 300 ATK right off the bat, so her initial ATK (but not her original ATK) is 2600. If you play an all-DARK deck, you could pump her up to 4200. That's not even including the ATK gained from your opponent's DARK monsters. Maybe you could start her off around 1500 ATK or so to make her a little less powerful, so she can utilize the ATK gained from both sides of the field.

 

Finally, you might want to give her another effect that's more representative of the Blackwing archetype. I'm not sure what such an effect might be, so you'll have to ask someone else.

 

Overall, I like it. 9/10

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