yugiohgx12345 Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 This is my new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Alright then... First card, overpowered. Second card, the effect is rather boring, and overall, quite useless as seeing there are plenty of other cards the pick off stuff in graveyard without you having to discard a card. Third card, first time since I've been around that I've seen someone use an action figure for a card image. This effect is also kind of blah...and basically, he's a powered up wildheart. Fourth card, also a very bland effect, not to mention his ATK will rarely, if ever, rise above 2000, if that. Fifth card, this one caught me off guard, as seeing I though you were going to an E-hero theme. And being able to perform a heavy storm for a couple of turns by discarding a dino is a bit overpowered. IMO And, your sixth card, I think I've seen a card with a similar effect, can't remember what though. And also, the sun is not a planet... Overall, for being some of your first cards, they aren't bad. Though yes, they could use improvement. Your OCG needs some work as well, but it too, is not awful. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDevil27 Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Look now, you have brilliant ideas in you, but you have to try harder. Let your mind go wild. If you have to spend 10 min searching for a nice picture, do it. Just make it cooler. When i registered in this site i was a noobie ( i`m not saying you are ) and i didn`t know enything. So i spent lots of hours reading OCG rules, looking at other cards. And then after hundreds of minutes i learnt how to make cooler cards, so don`t rush it. If you spend 30 minutes for a card it will be almost perfect. Im not gonna rate, cause they aren`t that much good. :) Just keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohgx12345 Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 do ya like these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snetonobre Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I've liked the Elemental Hero Aqua Huntsman but the images of your other elemental heroes are an crap (sorry, sorry) and the last two cards in that post are good but their images doesn't are, so try harder to search more. it's been some time that I'm lookin' in a planet/star archetype so if you make more of these planet cards I will like then and about the more recent cards in the new post the first is too powerful (imagine drawing Obelisk) and the second: why anyone will add in their decks an level five normal monster with an ATK and DEF of 2000 (I've seen many other monsters of level five with more ATK & DEF higher and good effects) and of the plant-type (thanks to yu-gi-oh 5d's an plant-type monster is only good if it can enter in an deck similar to the deck of Akiza) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 well.. overall..5/10try again.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 4/10all of you heroes have similar effects -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohgx12345 Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 hi i made some more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Creepy Pics OCG Errors 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 way too short effects for all of them most of them I see you could have simply combined the effects together into 1 card, that would have made it better 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 The effects are Alright. The OCG is not good. But its alright. Keep it up and you'll be up to shape in no time. 8/10 for effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohgx12345 Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Thanks man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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