monopody Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 sorry for earier, harshly critique these please: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 ...... For starters, I'm not nice when it comes to new members spamming out dragon cards. Also, you used Red-Eyes at that. MY favorite card. First off, you need to work on your OCG. Study up some of the TCG cards and look in the OCG thread to polish up on that. Being a new member, it's really so surprise. Next, your first card is overpowered. Even if you can't put it's second effect to use, though it wouldn't be too hard...(DNA Surgery), it's still a 3000 ATK beatstick for 1 tribute. Which would be easy to come by when running a zombie deck. The second card...also overpower. Pull a zombie or dragon from your deck whenever a zombie is summoned, that is too much. And to top it off, you added a Soul Absorption effect. The third card is also, once again, overpowered. That card is already broken because of necroface, who happens to be what? A zombie. With necroface, this card would get an instant 3000 ATK boost. Not to mention there are several other cards that would make this card mad powerful. Overall...1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monopody Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 I agree the last two are overpowered and i know the effects i put in them, but the first is just a blue-eyes version of red-eys b. zombie dragon, i thought it would be cool. i'll work on the bottom two though, they are too overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 I agree the last two are overpowered and i know the effects i put in them' date=' but the first is just a blue-eyes version of red-eys b. zombie dragon, i thought it would be cool. i'll work on the bottom two though, they are too overpowered[/quote'] I know it is, but you should remember, that REBZD has only 2400 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monopody Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 your right, that does make him less agressive, i have an ideais this any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Honestly...I think you should make a different effect for you blue-eyes zombie. When have Blue-eyes and Red-eyes really ever shared the same concept? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monopody Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 ok, your right i agree. i'll think of something. sorry if i offended you.i'll post a new bulliten when i've fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 15, 2010 Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Haha, not offended. No worries there. I'm curious of how you're edits will turn out. I'll be sure to see them when you post them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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