My 2 dragon cards.

[Nmaster]

[DDevil27]

too OVERPOWERED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8 stars - ATK 3500 DEF 3000 !!!????!!!! and an bonus effect

dude learn how to balance

make their attacks ATK 2800 and DEF 2000

that will be more balanced then now

[Starly_64]

-The concept for both cards are a bit too unoriginal. Seriously, "Dark Dragon"? These could be a lot more imaginative.

-Both of the cards are too powerful. There are no drawbacks to make them balanced when it comes to their high ATK.

-Dark Dragon is not a real Type. IMO, it should simply be Dragon-Type

-Images are okay, but Skull Dragon's one could be better.

-OCG errors in effects, eg. use " when quoting a Card Name

-The effects are also too bland. Try to make an effect that's creative, and not just a point gainer.

 

However, you are new here, so they are far from being terrible. 4/10.

[Nmaster]

It are my 2nd and 3rd card,I am still learning it.

But maybe you are right,i will change their ATK.

[Blazer]

Your a new mem so its alright.

Dark Dragon, First thats not a real type. Just make it plain dragon.

Overpowered for a 8 star monster, try making it 10 stars.

First Card:

When this card and "Skull Dragon" are on the field, both cards gain 500 ATK and DEF points.

Second Card:

When this card and "Black Dragon" are on the field, both cards gain 500 ATK and DEF points.

Plus more people will look more if you make the effects longer. Too short to make a whole thread about it. There effects are Ehh... Alright .

So in the future make sure to make it better.

For some help go to this thread. You'll be up to shape in no time at all.

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-186711.html

My rating is 3.9/10

[Brimtosis]

Okay, Before I point out the strengths and weaknesses of your cards, there is no such type as 'Dark Dragon'. There is 'Dragon', 'Reptile' and 'Dinosaur', but no 'Dark Dragon'. This is to save you from members who like to point at members for fake subtypes, but I don't mind them. Questions? No? Good. Now we have that astablished, lets get down to buissines.

 

Card 1: Bad OCG. Here is a fix:

'When both this card and 'Skull Dragon' is on the feild, they gain 500 ATK and DEF' Not the best effect, but I've seen worse. Plus, t would be hard for both of them to be on the feild at the same time. 6.5/10

 

Card 2: Same effect, same errors. Fix:

'When both this card and 'Black Dragon' is on the feild, they gain 500 ATK and DEF' Same as above. 6.5/10

 

Overall: 6.5/10. Good for a new member, and better than some members I've seen. I hope to see more of your cards in the future.

[Nmaster]

It was the best pic I found for Skull Dragon.

I will make my dragons better with new effects.

Thanks for the advice,everyone!

[goldenbjr8]

Your Dragons are great!!!!!!!!!!!

8/10

Im sorry aboutmy Ka Yumi Set

[Nmaster]

Thanks,but the effects aren't too well.

I already opened a new topic with the changes,everyone.

And it can happen.