Master White Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Hope you all like this very very very evil card. It may be a nice card for some, but I call it just plain Evil. Enjoy. [spoiler=Picture & effect] [spoiler=effect]This card cannot be, Normal, Special Summoned, or flipped face-up except by tributing 3 monsters with 1000 or more atk, switch control of this monster to your opponent when it is successfully Summoned. During the End Phase of this turn, the controller of this card adds this card to their opponents hand. Once per turn, the controller of this card loses 500 Life Points. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, remove it from play. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, inflict 5000 damage to the controller of the card that destroyed this card. ----------~Effect edited and credited to Darklink401 for the fix. Changed one part of it to 500 because it is meant to be a little evil. lol. Thank You Darklink401. An evil effect, reason being is because all effects I see is either to tear down a deck or to help a deck, well how about a card that is hurtful to both players. I know, it was fun, hard, and creative to do. Maybe a bit over powered, but hey, it is an evil card. lol. Enjoy my friends, enjoy while you survive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, or flipped face-up, switch control of it to your opponent. During the End Phase of this turn, the controller of this card adds this card to their opponents hand. Once per turn, the controller of this card loses 100 Life Points. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, remove it from play. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, inflict 5000 damage to the controller of the card that destroyed this card. Anyway, pic is... odd. Effect seems like lava golem, but more extreme, and not as useful... 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted February 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Thanks for the edit and the rating darklink401, and I intended it to be useless for both players, because it is an evil card. I kind of based off lava golem, but made it a little different for the fun of it. Thank you, and yea, 100 kinda does suit it better than 1000, but how about 500, or then would it be too op'd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 the effect is kind of confusing...:S but it is quite insane :X 8/10~ Good Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwoTime Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 The effect is a little off, how would you get the final effect off if the card goes back to your hand at the end phase? And 5000 damage is a little much, but who takes the damage I'm a little confused. In the end all you'll end up doing is inflicting 100 points of damage, not worth two tributes. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Confusing but i like the pic, change the damage lower than 5000 either that or over 9000!!!!rate 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Aiku: My eyes hurt. OCG: Already pointed out. Effect: The effect is evil indeed, however, I find it too evil for ths master of fact. For exemple, this card doesn't have any drawback to its power, except for the 5000 burn on the controller. In other words, it should maybe have a certain drawback to its summoning, for exemple: '' This card can only be Summoned when your opponent has more than X Life Points than your Life Points.'' or '' This card can only be Summoned, when your opponent controls more than X cards than you.'' Little change like this can make the card more interresting and much more balance. Image and Name: The image is a mess. Nothing is artistic and its confusing. It doesn't even look like a Beast-Type monster. It's more a photoshop image, very poorly made for this card. Please, change the image or remember to put an image with a minimum of link with the name and effect in future cards. Overall: 5.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blaze. Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Um, no, just no. I'm sorry, because I don't usually grade cards this harshly.2.4/10 Mess of an image, quite too complicated of an effect. I dunno, I just dont like it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Mr:Two Time: the burn is for the person who kills it anyway by a card effect. Phanax Leminer; pic may be bad, but if I use a overused pic, it gets worse nowadays. Second, I got an additive you might like for the effect. Overflame; um, just no, just no. Hate it, I do. thats useless and not helpfull at all. you say its confusing when it is pretty similiar to lava golem, but more evil. second, the effect isn't complicated, because others understood this effect. thank you Phanax Leminer for some help.I updated and fixed it. All ratings were from the last edit. This edit is now made from all my own decision right after this post. Plse continue to rate the effect, pic may be confuing, but yea, so on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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