Wyvern Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 [align=center] First one! I call it Vipra or Repiv. You decide. From the two snakes of the game! This one...hmm. You can call him Sharkyena. From Mightyena and Gabite. This one is Tropitile I'll post more as I make them![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Arpiv.. Doesn't really fit with the other two snake names, but either way, really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvern Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 it wasn't supposed to be a backwards name, just a mix of viper and arbok. actually I should call it Repiv. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 it wasn't supposed to be a backwards name' date=' just a mix of viper and arbok. actually I should call it [b']Repiv[/b]. read Repiv backwards, please.~~the yellow bumps don't really fit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvern Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I knew that, I came up with the name (repiv) as I was writing that post. Which yellow bumps, on the stomach or on the back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 The Snake looks flawless, Sharkyena looks like it has a confused existence XD still good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 theses are good I like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Arbok+Seviper you are actually missing one of the snakes. You forgot poor little Dunsparce, who is a snake Pokemon =P The yellow spots don't stick out enough on the purple skin. It might have actually worked if you were able to put Seviper's colors on this, as it would fix the next problem I'm about to cover. Seviper overall doesn't appear to be a huge contributor. I can't put my finger on it, but something about this splice is too overly Arbok. So as I mentioned, the recolor could have probably helped a bit with making it a more balanced flow. The shading on the tail is backward, You flipped it around, so you should have reshaded it so the light source stays the same with the rest of the body. Mightyena+Gabite's biggest problem is the lack of Gabite in it. I looked at it and found myself asking why the arms looked so awkward, and where they came form for a moment. There is just too little Gabite to make this stand out. I think most people really would think of it as a weird looking Mightyena, rather than a splice. The spikes on the back don't quite match very well. You have the various areas that aren't recolored. Various points of dark grays that should be changed to blues. The most noticeable are on the tail, the hair near head, and at the tip of the leg where it should transcend to blue. Keep working on it, you'll get the hang of it. Take your time and pay close attention to detail. Do this, and you'll see your work get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvern Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Very good advice. Hard to follow, but I'll try. My new one I had to mess around with the shading since they didn't go together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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