Mr.WHAM Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 This is a poem i made...I would edit it to make the title and stuff like you guys know how to do but I'm going to leave it as thus...never mind i figured it out I think... And on a side note, I made this poem before I ever started RPing or even really posted in Forums... Comment, Rate, Hate, Suggestions, possible Improvements, anything else you can think of. The Wolf’s Moon by Mr.Wham(Insert My Real Name Here) The day has faded into oblivion,A coup de grace for the dying DayFrom the Night’s Empire,And at the summitWe see the Empire’s Crown Jewel High above the vast Smoky Mountains,Deep within the Ever–Changing, Ever–Endless Azure Ocean,Past the Gems of Eras Gone, the Jewels of Old,Gravitating in the Ebony Void,Is the Moon. But this is no normal moon–Oh no it’s so much moreA full moon of Opportunity and Creation,The halo of light illuminates its fissures and fissionsAnd with brilliance that rivals the Sun A light radiates from this moon,A light that scours the depths of the soul,Claws at the your dreams,And sets ablaze the awaiting inferno So tonight we howl my brothers and sistersFor we feast on desire and passionWe react on drive and instinctNo longer shall we be restricted by the chain of the tameWe are free, feral, and primal;Released by the gaze of this primeval rock.The yellow-eyed, sleek beast is set free, On the Night of the Wolf’s Moon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 That was so deep I'm scared. are you god? (jk im christian) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I think I wrote this for Trinity Blood or sumphin...Wait no...I was just boreded... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horologia Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 It´s sounds really nice, as far as i can say, but english is not my mother tounge ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 wolf's are overated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Yea but I do love em.....if only itt was the nine tailed wold but foxes are like cats & wolves mixxed I suppose... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I really love it. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Nice poem. You inspired me. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 How so lol! Thanks for rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pudpop Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I love it, but it needs work.I preferred the one in your sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Where would you say it should be improved? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Cows are what's pimping these days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 You all do realize that the Wolf's Moon is just the title right? If you look through the poem it actually doesn't mention the actual animal until the Last Stanza Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Nice.Good word ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 epic,just epic i'll give you a rep because it was so epicly epic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtemisFowl Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Love it, inspiring, deep. Awesome ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks...I think this poem is really weird only b/c I wrote b/c I was sleepy and the moon was out.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 you need to write more,so i can copy you for my english class Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niño Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Decaptalize. Other than that noice. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Riku if you want I can give you an old poem lol I don't mind at all...I just wish I could find something I wrote....It was hella hard...better than this definitely... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Yea im just gunna bump this...In 3 days if it gets nomore replies...I'll ask it to be locked^^! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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