Music8aznl Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 This is my first Hollow-Type Card...Please Rate and Comment It...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Yo, nice pic and if you want to make fake types make sure it's correct. It should be Arrancar =) and can you please paste the card effect too ? I can't see some of it. use spoiler, if you don't know here how: spoiler=(name)] the card link there a "[" at the front some OCG(the yugioh card spellings) errors too, after you post the effect I'll check again. the cards kinda good, jus can't see the effect too well that's all~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Music8aznl Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 OK.....Thanks for the advice, maybe I will remake it...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 hey, don't be offended, your 1st post is good =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Music8aznl Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 OK, sorry for waiting.... [spoiler=(Ulquiorra Schiffer)] This Card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card can only be Special Summoned by Paying 500 Life Points and Removing 1 DARK Hollow -Type. This Card can Attack Directly to the Opponent's Life Points. This Card can gain 4000 ATK if you Paying 750 Life Points and Sacrifice 1 DARK Monster. When this Card is Destroyed, you can Special Summoned "Yammi Riyalgo". If "Yammi Riyalgo" Card is successfully Special Summoned, you can Destroy 2 DARK Monsters from your opponent Field and sent it tho your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Fake type, ocg errors Card=cardPaying=payingetc.way too OPed10 or higher stars=4000 atkrate 5/10(check rate chart for further info) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raymond5577 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Your effect:This Card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card can only be Special Summoned by Paying 500 Life Points and Removing 1 DARK Hollow -Type. This Card can Attack Directly to the Opponent's Life Points. This Card can gain 4000 ATK if you Paying 750 Life Points and Sacrifice 1 DARK Monster. When this Card is Destroyed, you can Special Summoned "Yammi Riyalgo". If "Yammi Riyalgo" Card is successfully Special Summoned, you can Destroy 2 DARK Monsters from your opponent Field and sent it tho your Graveyard. Some correction: Change it to level 10 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Card can only be Special Summoned by paying 500 Life Points and removing 1 DARK Arrancar -type monster card you control on the field. This card can attack your opponent directly on. This Card can gain 4000 ATK if you pay 1500 Life Points and Tribute 1 DARK monster you control. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summoned 1 "Yammi Riyalgo"from your deck or Graveyard. If "Yammi Riyalgo" is successfully Special Summoned, you can destroy 2 DARK monsters your opponent control and send it into the Graveyard----------------------I change the effect a bit cause it's an easy win if you only pay 750 LP, so I double it. The OCG I'm not too good at but I've done some correction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Music8aznl Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Thanks....Maybe I will remake it..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
火 Neiller 火 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 not bad but in the future try not to do new monster types unless they sub-types and raymond's suggestions sound great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 corrected lore below, whenever u edit a card or add a lore, put it within the first post by clicking edit, quick edit, then pasting the code/lore in. also this cards atk and def shud be 0, not ? and it kinda OPed, unless u make it level 10 or w/e. hope this helps This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 500 Life Points and removing from play 1 DARK Hollow-Type monster. This card can attack your opponent directly. You can increase this card's ATK by 4000 by paying 750 Life Points and Tributing 1 DARK monster. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Yammi Riyalgo". If "Yammi Riyalgo" is successfully Special Summoned, you can destroy 2 DARK monsters your opponent controls and send them to your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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