Data Project (new cards added)

[naruto110]

credit for pics goes to alcander

[-Griffin]

The first one is almost an exact copy of a banned card, but better. That speaks for itself.

The second one is reasonable, but doesn't seem to work with the other cards enough.

The third, again, doesn't work very well in the Deck, since the Deck doesn't swarm or protect enough to get much use from the effect, leaving it as a mediocre beatstick.

Data Knight is simply too weak.

General seems to be a Level 7 monster that gets 5000 ATK when Normal Summoned, effectively. Since you'll almost always get another copy of itself - it could be problematic with M of the Emperor.

Squid is a Level 4 DARK Tuner, so it has some usability, but the effect is very minor and it wouldn't see much play.

The Synchro is good for recovering Squid for other Synchros, but needing 2 non-tuners makes it very situational to Summon, and most people would just take TRA or Stardust instead.

 

Overall, these cards are simply too weak and don't work together very well. With the exception of the first, which would require that they make a special change to the banlist in the middle of a format just to ban it.

[chrid97]

Okay so dark should be caps and you missed a period in a few. And finnaly you should try to make longer effects.

[-Griffin]

You should try to make longer effects.

 

Book of Moon, Needlebug Nest, Gadgets, Volcanic Shell/Rocket, Fissure, Smashing Ground, Shrink, XX-Saber R, Airbellum, Emmersblade, Saber Slash, Heavy Storm, that's just a few random cards pulled from 2 of my favorite Decks.

All of them have effects that probably fit on 1 line if I typed them in this text box. Please, don't tell people to use longer effects, it really gets on my nerves >< Simple effects are often the best.

[chrid97]

You should try to make longer effects.

 

Book of Moon' date=' Needlebug Nest, Gadgets, Volcanic Shell/Rocket, Fissure, Smashing Ground, Shrink, XX-Saber R, Airbellum, Emmersblade, Saber Slash, Heavy Storm, that's just a few random cards pulled from 2 of my favorite Decks.

All of them have effects that probably fit on 1 line if I typed them in this text box. Please, don't tell people to use longer effects, it really gets on my nerves >< Simple effects are often the best.

[/quote']srry >.< didnt mean to bother anyone

[kira179]

I see quite a few OCG errors in these cards. Also, Data Freezer is spelled wrong, and it also has almost the same effect as "Finrir". I am not a great speller myself, so its not that big of a deal to mispell things for me. Here are some OCG/Grammatical errors i found.

 

Data Freezer: "your opponent skips his next draw phase." --> your opponent skips his/her ned Draw Phase.

 

Data Negater --> Data Negator: "during your opponents battle phase" --> during your oppononent's Battle Phase

 

Data Wizard: "As long as this card stays on your field each time you play a dark Fiend-type monster inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent" --> As long as this card remains face-up on you side of the field, each time you summon a DARK Fiend-Type monster inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Data Knight: "As long as this card stays on the field you" --> As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you

 

Data General: " When this card is normal Summoned you can Special Summon one Data monster from your hand." --> When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon 1 "Data" monster from your hand to your side of the field.

 

Data Squid's name need to be capitalized on "squid" and need a period.

 

Data God: "Once per turn you can get one Data monster from your grave yard and Special Summon it it the field,if you use this effect this monster cannot attack" --> Once per turn, you can select 1 "Data" monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it on your side of the field. This card cannot declare attacks on the turn this card's effect is activated.

 

Overall, these cards are ok, ill give them a 7/10 if you correct OCG errors.