fivegod Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 this is the first ritual monster i've ever made. i thought it turned out well. tell me what you think- [attachment=17012] [attachment=17011] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcox1995 Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Eh....good effect, not overpowered, 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 thanks! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 it's pretty good i guess.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Hmm, could improve, but pretty cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Good pics. Good effects. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 what needs tweeking? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Oh. .Somehow the card is shining to me XDThat picture. . The ritual monster. . I know I've seen it before :3 And only recently too :3The effect. . Between over and not. It could be a indestructible wall, with other graveyard effect to boot. But with an Attack like that. .Hm. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 anybody else got input-ratings or other? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 eh its good i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 Far too much going on. theres a contridiction in your effect. Some OCG and grammar errors. overused picture. overall, not good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 input ratings ?Edit + Ah yes, thanks for reminding that Osiris-san :3The contradiction is Special Summon. You should put "Ignore the Summoning Condition" with the effect when Crecent Moon is going to be Special Summon from the Graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 nice card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 30, 2007 Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 8/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 dj osiris- "too much going on"-are you serious! can you not handle more than one idea at a time? its complex, making it pretty unique"overused picture"- find me 2 cards with that picture and maybe i'll believe you.i'll fix the effect but that was about the only non-bs comment you made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted December 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2007 kobekid and bloodrun- thanks for the support ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 nice cards but a bit too plagiarist don u think. 9.5/10hey but i cant say anything about plagiarismsi do it on my essays all the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 thanks for the 9.5 ^_^ - if i did plagiarize, i seriously didn't mean to cause i spent a lot of time fixing this effect and i swear i didn't look at anything to help me, but i guess its possible. any more ratings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 8/10 a bit overpowered but everthing else Brilliant B+:-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celoco28 Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 this would be a perfect card if the ritual summon did not contradict the cards effect, add something like what kryuzei said and it will make a little more sense, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivegod Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 i tried to add in a sentence to fix the contradiction, but the print on the card became so small it was impossible to read so i figured i'd just have to leave it as it was. is there a way around this?- i'd love to know, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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