Revenge Exodia

[Project Leviamon]

Im make Exodia:

 

[Lexadin]

Pic is bad.

OCG is way off. (Paste it below the card to get it fixed)

Almost the same as Exodius.

All togeter a normal beginner card.

A 6/10.

Check my sig for good pic sites. And check the OCG thread for help.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only special summoned by removing from play two monsters in your graveyard with "The Forbidden One" in their card name. This card's ATK is the number of Face-Up Attack Position monsters on the field X1000. This card's DEF is the number of Defense Position monsters on the field X1000. If this card is Face-Up on the field, the effect of "Exodia the Forbidden One" cannot be activated.

 

This is the right OCG (maybe 1 or 2 mistakes still, but)

 

The ATK and DEF should be made both ?. The "Revenge" next to "Spellcaster" is unneeded. The summoning conditions are... not good. The pic looks like it came from Google.

 

1. Look at other realistic cards in here to gain ideas.

2. Go type "DeviantART" in google. It's a good picture site. Many people get good pics from there.

 

Since you're a newby (and my first card was named "Po, Lord of Searing Flames" (lol), and this is better than most newby creations I've seen so far, 6/10. You can do better. I know it. People only use 2 to 5% of their brain in their whole life time.

[ragnarok1945]

Revenge isn't a real type

 

the picture is too boring anyway

 

that goes for capitalization and OCG as well

 

but since you're new I'll give this 5.5/10