failed_life801 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 This card can only be Summoned if you have 5 or more DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Remove all DARK monsters from your Graveyard from play to Summon this card. While this card is face-up on the Field you do not take battle damage from battles including monsters with "Black Sun" in their names. All "Black Sun" monsters gain x300 ATK and DEF for every face-up Spell or Trap Card on the Field, including this card. When this card is destroyed , Special Summon 1 "Black Sun Dark Arch Templar" from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Obelisk Of The Black Sun". When this card attacks a monster, that monster's effect is negated. This card gets 100 ATK and DEF points for every Spell Card in your Graveyard. If this card is send to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Black Sun Hyperion" from your Deck, Hand or Graveyard. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Black Sun Dark Arch Templar". This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card attacks a monster, that monster's effect is negated and the targeted card is removed from play. While this card is on your side of the field, you do not receive battle damage. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card to the Field. _____________________________________________________ I know that i have lots of OCG errors, so pls point them out, so i'll know for the future... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 1. WAAAAAY too underpowered!!!!2. I monster with ??? ATK or DEF cannot gain ATK or DEF without ??? standing for a number. That's like x + 2 = ?. I am too lazy atm too correct the other OCG errors I spotted. 7/10 Changed my rate to 7/10 because your OCG is good for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
failed_life801 Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 How about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 How about now? Not as underpowered. But, until you re-word the 2nd card's OCG or change it's ATK and DEF to a solid number, my rate remains the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 UP'ed OCG Errors Good Pics 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
failed_life801 Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I made Black Sun Dark Arch Templar's ATK and DEF solid numbers... And removed almost all of the weaknesses... I hope its better now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I made Black Sun Dark Arch Templar's ATK and DEF solid numbers... And removed almost all of the weaknesses... I hope its better now... Now it's OP'ed. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
failed_life801 Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I'm gonna rly eat myself... Touched Dark Arch Templar and the Obelisk a little... If this isn't good I'm gonna trow my laptop out the window... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenogears Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I'm gonna rly eat myself... Touched Dark Arch Templar and the Obelisk a little... If this isn't good I'm gonna trow my laptop out the window... That would be awesome!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I'm gonna rly eat myself... Touched Dark Arch Templar and the Obelisk a little... If this isn't good I'm gonna trow my laptop out the window... That would be awesome!! I lol'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
failed_life801 Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I lol at everything... But right now i wanna know r my cards ok.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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