boy genius Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Here it isbumpbump again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gredious AKA. Solomon409 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 card feels a little bit to OPKed, maby make it harder to summon? or take out the part bout gainen 2000 lp when summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 the pic is getting overused there's capitalization errors (like normal summoned should be Normal Summoned) Light should be LIGHT since that's an attribute so it can have its weak atks. Though all it really goes is burn your opponent by 500 and grant you LP, SLIGHTLY dull though 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boy genius Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I don't quite think its over powered because it has 0 defense points, and you can have like 1000 life points and your opponent can have 4000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Well first of all that pic is not only bad, but its overused. I have seen it in alot of cards but i first saw it in a Finished Set that had to do with Jesus(Bad Set). If You could please write out the effect please it would make it more easy for people to correct and give you the correct ocg for the card. In the first part of the sentence you said "by removing 2 Light monsters you control". It should be "by removing from play 2 LIGHT monsters your control." Sorry, i am unsure about the rest of the effect so i cant help you with that but i did notice that your said "inflict points of damage". The new ocg is more easy so dont say that, just say "Inflict damage". I think the last part of the effect where this cards inflicts damage and increases your own Life Points is op'd I would take out the increase your own Life Points part and just stick with damaging your opponents. The damage isnt to great but if this was me making the card, i would say you have to discard 1 Fairy-Type monster but you dont have to, thats just me. I also think you should drop the level to either 8 or 7. 9 is to high and kind of unnecessary to be honest. Overall......ok card. Just improve on those things. And the ocg thread is always there for help if you need it. 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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