Coming Back Card *0*'

[→мαthєus.]

hm' ya know .. i was away for few months and now Im Back with a new card i just made'

 

// Credit: Wanderley // thanks dude .. you rock!

 

here's the card

 

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LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Advance Summoned by releasing 3 Spellcaster-Type mosnters you control whose ATK is equal or lower than 1000. This card's ATK is equal to the total ATK of the released monsters. Once per turn, If this card is the target of a Spell or Trap Card that destroys this card, you can negate the effect of that card and destroy it. When this card is Special Summoned its ATK and DEF are equal to 0. If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your Graveyard whose ATK is equal or higher than 1500 in face-up Attack Position.[/align]

[RAEGING D0GKING]

LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Advance Summoned by releasing 3 Spellcaster-Type mosnters you control whose ATK is equal or lower than 1500, and cannot be affected by Spell or Trap Cards whose target only 1 monster. This card's ATK is equal to the total ATK of the released monsters. When this card is Special Summoned its ATK and DEF are equal to 0. If this card is destroyed by battle you can add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. Shuffle your Deck.

 

Take out that part.

Maybe you should make it when it is destroyed

Draw 1 card then send it to the graveyard and add a card from your deck to your hand to what veer it was example : If you drew a Spell than you add a Spell to your hand.

But with that kinda of effect im not sure of the proper OCG.

9.5/10

[DDevil27]

some OCG errors 9/10

[→мαthєus.]

Take out that part.

Maybe you should make it when it is destroyed

Draw 1 card then send it to the graveyard and add a card from your deck to your hand to what veer it was example : If you drew a Spell than you add a Spell to your hand.

But with that kinda of effect im not sure of the proper OCG.

9.5/10

 

yeah ill fix'

 

it's like Winged Dragon of Ra's effect but not that overpowered ^^'

 

EDIT: FixED'

[Dranzer]

Very UP'd.What protection does it have againts monster's attacks and effects.

 

7/10

[→мαthєus.]

what did you mean?

[ragnarok1945]

eh, too many of the effects siphoned from Ra's anime effect

 

I find this not too creative, but nevertheless reasonably balanced out

 

7.9/10

[→мαthєus.]

what? explain please the part of 'but nevertheless reasonably balanced out'

[£>-ShådøwBøx-<3]

Balanced, OCG is okay for Old OCG so i give a 89%

[→мαthєus.]

Very UP'd.What protection does it have againts monster's attacks and effects.

 

7/10

 

It's not up'ed cause as the same time it cannot be destroyed by Traps OR Spells it cannot be helped by them understand?

 

BUT I'm think that would be good to change to "Once per turn, if this card is targeted by a Trap or Spell Card that destroys this card, negate the effect and destroy that card also."

[→мαthєus.]

BUMP > Card Updated , please fix possible OCG errors *0*'