Skylord Avion

[Cowsmacker]

well these where the first 2 cards i ever made and i found them in a folder has op as ever so i decided i would rebalance and remake them. i dont know if i under powered or overpowered them so ile leave that for you to decide so i can make more adjustments since me and my friend like to make custom cards, and use them in are decks as the final decision if they are op or not but its good to also get the general view of the public. also to know if i have OCG errors and i bet i do.

 

 

EFFECT

 

This card cannot be sent to the graveyard after the 2nd turn it is on the field. Every turn this card is on the field you must pay 700 life points{this is not optional}. after the 4th turn this card is on the field you can remove this and 1 card from your hand from play to Special Summon 1 "Skylord Avion" from your hand or deck.

 

 

 

ATK: 2650 DEF: 2100

 

EFFECT

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Avion Temple". when this card comes into play put 3 Avion Counters. it also gains these following effects.

. Remove 2 avion counters to negate the effect of a spell,trap, or monster card and destroy it.

. Remove 2 avion counters to attack once again in a row.

. Remove 1 avion counter to increase this cards attack or defense by 500 points.

. During a turn this card does not attack, it gains 2 avion counters{max 6}.

[ragnarok1945]

some capitalization errors, like normal summoned should be Normal Summoned

 

for the 2nd card, you should have said REMOVE the counters to activate such effects. Then, you need to state a max number of counters the card can hold

 

7.7/10

[darman05]

nice 9.8/10 but i agree with ragnarok1945

[Cowsmacker]

alright thanks i made some adjustments.