Very first render -- PLEASE C&C

[Twin Seed]

My very first render, I didn't even restart after a mistake, that's why it's so 'choppy', so to speak.

 

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[spoiler=Original]

 

 

Yes, it's choppy. Not sure about being low-quality though, you tell me.

 

I followed Skippy Canoe's GIMP GFX Tuturial .

[Twin Seed]

Bump.

[G-Break]

well, need more practice.. it still a part of BG left

try zooming when you render :]

[EHN.]

Bit of ehad missing, LOADS of BG left. That tut is only good if you have extreme experience with GIMP. Use the path tool method until you get familiar.

[gizmo00999]

i suggest free select tool, it's easyer =3of course if ur patient.

[Twin Seed]

well' date=' need more practice.. it still a part of BG left

try zooming when you render :']

Where?

I did zoom.

 

Bit of ehad missing' date=' LOADS of BG left. That tut is only good if you have extreme experience with GIMP. Use the path tool method until you get familiar.

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Where is the bg left? I, honestly, don't see it.

Path Tool Method?

[§hadow §triker]

Use the path tool, zoom in, and select around the images border.

Anyways, very choppy. Cut off parts of the dude, and left some BG. Keep trying

[G-Break]

Use the path tool' date=' zoom in, and select around the images border.

Anyways, very choppy. Cut off parts of the dude, and left some BG. Keep trying

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this ^