Warwolf121 Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 im making cards for my character in an RPG, so constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, mostly about the effects. oh and if there are ocg errors, which im sure there are, can you tell me what they are? thanksso here they are: rate plz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast as the type more than half the cards have like only 1 effect, for some that's ok since they're low leveled, others you should have given more nevertheless, this is a very impressive start for a new member, and I'm glad you chose FIRE since they get little respect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warwolf121 Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Pretty good cards. I must say I was surprised at the ocg when I looked at the cards. For a new member it's pretty good. As a FIRE set, it follows the general rule of thumb for Fire attributes quite well. Good job with that one. Some of the effects are mehish and that Burning Eagle Felt a little OPED to me but overall good. 8/10 Good Job. You did good for a new guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warwolf121 Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 thank you, i will lessen burning eagle's effect...somehow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 It's more the fact that it's a LV 4 Tuner monster. Combine it with that effect and, if it were real, it would overcentralize the competitive enviorment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warwolf121 Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 what level would you recommend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 For that card.... hrm..... Lessen the ATK and DEF a little bit and make it a lv 3. I think that'll help it a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warwolf121 Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 okidoke, i did it, thanks for the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warwolf121 Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draikan74 Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Just had a quick look over it, i think you did pretty good, I love fire cards and i think you did a great job 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Pretty good cards. I must say I was surprised at the ocg when I looked at the cards. For a new member it's pretty good. As a FIRE set' date=' it follows the general rule of thumb for Fire attributes quite well. Good job with that one. Some of the effects are mehish and that Burning Eagle Felt a little OPED to me but overall good. 8/10 Good Job. You did good for a new guy.[/quote'] This.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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