Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 [align=center][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned remove from play a Earth, Water or Fire monster on your side of the field to gain the following effect.-EARTH: Pay 500 Life Points to halve the ATK and DEF of one card on the field until the end phase. This effect can only be used once a turn.-WATER: Pay 500 Life Points to return 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field to the respected players hand and discard the top card on your deck. This effect can only be used once a turn.-FIRE: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on your side of the field to inflict 500 Life Points to your opponent. This effect can only be used once a turn. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Don't like the pic that much.I liked the idea of the envoys, but they where both to OP, and so is this card.The Fire one is the only ballanced effect.Earth is Op, becouse it makes itself almost indestructable.Water is Op, becouse you can easily whipe an opponent's field clean in max 1500 Life points.The Attributes should be in caps, so Earth=EARTH.A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Earth, Water, and Fire need to be full capitalized (they're attributes, remember?) also you should only allow that effect to be used once per turn EARTH and WATER's effects are too Oped. Both of them need far greater drawbacks to it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted February 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 OK, i will edited right now, i will post edited card in bout 10-15 mins.there i fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harman1992 Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 i like the effect of it, very creative, 8/10, applause. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 Much better.A 8.1/10, now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 22, 2010 Report Share Posted February 22, 2010 OK' date=' i will edited right now, i will post edited card in bout 10-15 mins.[hr']there i fixed it. that makes it better, now I can raise the rate to 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Thank you guys for the tips and help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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