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[ComingSoonNOT123]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, expect by sending 3 Zombie-Type monster from the field to the top of the respective player's Deck. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle place 1 Bone Counter (max8) on this card. Increase the Level of this card by 1 for each Bone Counter on this card. During your End Phase you can send 1 monster from your Deck to the Graveyard with a Level lower then the amount of Bone Counter(s) on this card. Once per turn can discard 1 Trap Card with the letter "r" in it's name to Special Summon 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard. If this card was sent from the field to the Graveyard it gain(s) this effect.

-While this card remains in your Graveyard each time a Zombie-Type monster is sent to the Graveyard you can activate 1 Quick Play Spell Card from your Deck.

If this card is Special Summoned it is removed from play during the End Phase.

 

You can Special Summon this card from your hand by discarding 1 Trap Card and sending the top 3 card(s) of your Deck to the Graveyard. If none of the sent card(s) is a "Lightsworn" monster this card is destroyed. When this card destroys a monster by battle, Special Summon 1 "Lightsworn" monster from your hand, with an ATK lower then your Life Points. Increase the ATK of this card by x100 equal to the amount of "Lightsworn" monster(s) in your Graveyard. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a "Lightsworn" monster it gains this effect

-While this card remains in your Graveyard all Spell Card(s) you control are treated as Quick Play Spell Cards.

 

When this card destroys a monster by battle Special Summon "Death Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) equal to the difference of Level between this card and the destroyed monster, in Defense Position. "Death Tokens" cannot be used for a Tribute Summon and do not take up Monster Card Zones. Once per a turn you can Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard with a Level equal to or less then the amount of "Death Tokens" you control. While this card remains face-up on the field you can have it gain(s) the effect of 1 Field Spell Card in your Graveyard.

 

the smiley face is supposed to be an eight...

[<}Alpha Frogodile{>]

WOW 9.5/10 just because some of the effects were random and seemed to be thrown in for no reason. but other than that, phenomonal.

 

as for the smiley, get rid of it by choosing "Disable Smilies" when you post.

[Chex]

This isn't such a bad card and it does confuse me at times. OCG is pretty flawless and the effect really stands out. 9/10

[ragnarok1945]

an overused pic, though I see nothing wrong with the OCG

 

you do have to put a space bar between 8 and ) though, or it'll turn out 8)

 

Trap with the letter "r" in the name, now THAT'S what I call a unique effect there

 

9.4/10

[Lexadin]

Pic is a little bit unclear, though to the colloring.

I think the name is a bit to much.

OCG is fine.

The letter part is pretty unique, effect is pretty well ballanced.

A 9.5/10

[Flexh]

Yes I Like It

the pic is a bit overused though

solid 9/10

[Guest Neo Fusion]

minor grammar errors and Lightsworn shud be in quotes, i dont get why the 2nd monster is a gemini either, otherwise good

[Leturn Master]

"Lunar Reaper" requires having 3 monsters, losing them, and then restricting your draw to monsters only for 2-3 turns. Her "Autonomous Action Unit" ability doesn't balance her, since it's costly and hard to pull off. Without any other real benefits, the girl is useless.

 

"Desti" I think would be overpowered, though the Trap-discard kind of makes up for his insane ability. Still, the fact that you're making a good support card for an OP Archtype means this card is overpowered. LS should not be getting any help.

[Yugioh42]

9.8/10

[The Official Jerk of YCM]

nice cards i luv them 9/10

[ComingSoonNOT123]

"Lunar Reaper" requires having 3 monsters' date=' losing them, and then restricting your draw to monsters only for 2-3 turns. Her "Autonomous Action Unit" ability doesn't balance her, since it's costly and hard to pull off. Without any other real benefits, the girl is useless.

 

"Desti" I think would be overpowered, though the Trap-discard kind of makes up for his insane ability. Still, the fact that you're making a good support card for an OP Archtype means this card is overpowered. LS should [i']not[/i] be getting any help.

 

you do realize its supposed to be used with zombie world? as you can probably tell the lore doesnt say "you control" and it also states respective player's deck so yah (you should read it more clearly)! plus i'm trying to make zombie world more playable since it prevents 1 of the most dangerous deck Marco Monarch (graveyard is essential for a META zombie deck)

 

as for LS "sin" archetype is coming out, hopefully it'll be nerfed but it'll be the new ruling deck in terms of speed. plus broinac decks are actually better then LS

[Leturn Master]

"Lunar Reaper" requires having 3 monsters' date=' losing them, and then restricting your draw to monsters only for 2-3 turns. Her "Autonomous Action Unit" ability doesn't balance her, since it's costly and hard to pull off. Without any other real benefits, the girl is useless.

 

"Desti" I think would be overpowered, though the Trap-discard kind of makes up for his insane ability. Still, the fact that you're making a good support card for an OP Archtype means this card is overpowered. LS should [i']not[/i] be getting any help.

 

you do realize its supposed to be used with zombie world? as you can probably tell the lore doesnt say "you control" and it also states respective player's deck so yah (you should read it more clearly)! plus i'm trying to make zombie world more playable since it prevents 1 of the most dangerous deck Marco Monarch (graveyard is essential for a META zombie deck)

 

as for LS "sin" archetype is coming out, hopefully it'll be nerfed but it'll be the new ruling deck in terms of speed. plus broinac decks are actually better then LS

 

oh, you're right. Nevermind, it's hopelessly overpowered. A free Monarch-beater for maybe -1. And then those beneficial effects are just icing on the cake.

 

And I'm gonna have to tell you that LS destroys "Brionac". SJC Los Angeles's Top 16 (the most recent SJC tourney, I'm pretty sure) only ran multiple "Brionacs" in Decks where their strategy was Zombies (6/16 Decks--INCLUDING hybrids), and even those Decks weren't "Brionac" Decks. LS topped even those out, at 8/16.

[ComingSoonNOT123]

"Lunar Reaper" requires having 3 monsters' date=' losing them, and then restricting your draw to monsters only for 2-3 turns. Her "Autonomous Action Unit" ability doesn't balance her, since it's costly and hard to pull off. Without any other real benefits, the girl is useless.

 

"Desti" I think would be overpowered, though the Trap-discard kind of makes up for his insane ability. Still, the fact that you're making a good support card for an OP Archtype means this card is overpowered. LS should [i']not[/i] be getting any help.

 

 

you do realize its supposed to be used with zombie world? as you can probably tell the lore doesnt say "you control" and it also states respective player's deck so yah (you should read it more clearly)! plus i'm trying to make zombie world more playable since it prevents 1 of the most dangerous deck Marco Monarch (graveyard is essential for a META zombie deck)

 

as for LS "sin" archetype is coming out, hopefully it'll be nerfed but it'll be the new ruling deck in terms of speed. plus broinac decks are actually better then LS

 

 

oh, you're right. Nevermind, it's hopelessly overpowered. A free Monarch-beater for maybe -1. And then those beneficial effects are just icing on the cake.

 

And I'm gonna have to tell you that LS destroys "Brionac". SJC Los Angeles's Top 16 (the most recent SJC tourney, I'm pretty sure) only ran multiple "Brionacs" in Decks where their strategy was Zombies (6/16 Decks--INCLUDING hybrids), and even those Decks weren't "Brionac" Decks. LS topped even those out, at 8/16.

 

can u stop talking about zombie world

oh so now it's OP? it's a 2 card combo that disables your opponent and plus your opponent must have lots of monsters on the field unless you wanna chain it with your monsters... and the only time a player would have 3 or more is to OTK

i said brionac deck is better, not more effective

in terms of cost availability

[Leturn Master]

"Lunar Reaper" requires having 3 monsters' date=' losing them, and then restricting your draw to monsters only for 2-3 turns. Her "Autonomous Action Unit" ability doesn't balance her, since it's costly and hard to pull off. Without any other real benefits, the girl is useless.

 

"Desti" I think would be overpowered, though the Trap-discard kind of makes up for his insane ability. Still, the fact that you're making a good support card for an OP Archtype means this card is overpowered. LS should [i']not[/i] be getting any help.

 

you do realize its supposed to be used with zombie world? as you can probably tell the lore doesnt say "you control" and it also states respective player's deck so yah (you should read it more clearly)! plus i'm trying to make zombie world more playable since it prevents 1 of the most dangerous deck Marco Monarch (graveyard is essential for a META zombie deck)

 

as for LS "sin" archetype is coming out, hopefully it'll be nerfed but it'll be the new ruling deck in terms of speed. plus broinac decks are actually better then LS

 

oh, you're right. Nevermind, it's hopelessly overpowered. A free Monarch-beater for maybe -1. And then those beneficial effects are just icing on the cake.

 

And I'm gonna have to tell you that LS destroys "Brionac". SJC Los Angeles's Top 16 (the most recent SJC tourney, I'm pretty sure) only ran multiple "Brionacs" in Decks where their strategy was Zombies (6/16 Decks--INCLUDING hybrids), and even those Decks weren't "Brionac" Decks. LS topped even those out, at 8/16.

can u stop talking about zombie world

oh so now it's OP? it's a 2 card combo that disables your opponent and plus your opponent must have lots of monsters on the field unless you wanna chain it with your monsters... and the only time a player would have 3 or more is to OTK

i said brionac deck is better, not more effective

in terms of cost availability

 

I just talked about "Zombie World". I thought you just messed up OCGSP, but the card is actually way too strong.

If you're running a decent "Zombie World" Deck, you'll have 3 of that guy, and 2 of this guy (since you can "Allure" it and all that). This means that chances of getting this combo out are high. And since your average turn ends with more than 1 monster on the field (2-3 isn't rare... and it's also not OTK material. At your worst, you'd be losing 1 monster, a problem that you can counter by performing your Normal Summon for that turn).

 

Yeah, this would destroy.

 

"plus broinac decks are actually better then LS" kind of doesn't include cost availability. So I guess I proved my point here.

[ComingSoonNOT123]

"Lunar Reaper" requires having 3 monsters' date=' losing them, and then restricting your draw to monsters only for 2-3 turns. Her "Autonomous Action Unit" ability doesn't balance her, since it's costly and hard to pull off. Without any other real benefits, the girl is useless.

 

"Desti" I think would be overpowered, though the Trap-discard kind of makes up for his insane ability. Still, the fact that you're making a good support card for an OP Archtype means this card is overpowered. LS should [i']not[/i] be getting any help.

 

you do realize its supposed to be used with zombie world? as you can probably tell the lore doesnt say "you control" and it also states respective player's deck so yah (you should read it more clearly)! plus i'm trying to make zombie world more playable since it prevents 1 of the most dangerous deck Marco Monarch (graveyard is essential for a META zombie deck)

 

as for LS "sin" archetype is coming out, hopefully it'll be nerfed but it'll be the new ruling deck in terms of speed. plus broinac decks are actually better then LS

 

oh, you're right. Nevermind, it's hopelessly overpowered. A free Monarch-beater for maybe -1. And then those beneficial effects are just icing on the cake.

 

And I'm gonna have to tell you that LS destroys "Brionac". SJC Los Angeles's Top 16 (the most recent SJC tourney, I'm pretty sure) only ran multiple "Brionacs" in Decks where their strategy was Zombies (6/16 Decks--INCLUDING hybrids), and even those Decks weren't "Brionac" Decks. LS topped even those out, at 8/16.

can u stop talking about zombie world

oh so now it's OP? it's a 2 card combo that disables your opponent and plus your opponent must have lots of monsters on the field unless you wanna chain it with your monsters... and the only time a player would have 3 or more is to OTK

i said brionac deck is better, not more effective

in terms of cost availability

 

I just talked about "Zombie World". I thought you just messed up OCGSP, but the card is actually way too strong.

If you're running a decent "Zombie World" Deck, you'll have 3 of that guy, and 2 of this guy (since you can "Allure" it and all that). This means that chances of getting this combo out are high. And since your average turn ends with more than 1 monster on the field (2-3 isn't rare... and it's also not OTK material. At your worst, you'd be losing 1 monster, a problem that you can counter by performing your Normal Summon for that turn).

 

Yeah, this would destroy.

 

"plus broinac decks are actually better then LS" kind of doesn't include cost availability. So I guess I proved my point here.

 

dude it's a 2 card combo.... since it seems you know a lot about TCG you would know how many OP combos their are

example = future fusion + 5 head dragon

that's 1 card and you can mill your deck for 5 dragons

activate send wyvern, white stone (instant +1), red eyes metal, and some beat down monsters. in 2 turns you have a 5k monster and you can use wyvern effect to bring back red eyes metal

 

let me put it in these terms would you rather make a LS deck or brionac (or something else) brionac decks OTK better and it's cheaper (way cheaper)

LS decks need monsters on the field to keep the swarming active

[ragnarok1945]

3rd pic looks best

 

though if they don't take up monster zones, the tokens can get OPed for easy synchro summoning material

 

and for its last effect, I think it'd be better if you allow the Field Spell effect gain for only 1 turn

 

8.4/10

[Leturn Master]

dude it's a 2 card combo.... since it seems you know a lot about TCG you would know how many OP combos their are

example = future fusion + 5 head dragon

that's 1 card and you can mill your deck for 5 dragons

activate send wyvern' date=' white stone (instant +1), red eyes metal, and some beat down monsters. in 2 turns you have a 5k monster and you can use wyvern effect to bring back red eyes metal

 

let me put it in these terms would you rather make a LS deck or brionac (or something else) brionac decks OTK better and it's cheaper (way cheaper)

LS decks need monsters on the field to keep the swarming active

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Ahhh yes... which is why Dragons are run in the meta so often.

 

Oh wait. They're not. "Future Fusion" is limited, and Dragon cards are ONLY useful for that combo and one or two others. But YOUR card is a freaking Dark Zombie-Type monster. Meaning it has the BEST SYNERGY EVER!!!! Not to mention the number of combinations you can pull off with her compared to the Dragons... So compare very little synergy and a few combos to INSANE synergy and a TON of combos. Tell me which is OP.

 

And that's where you get my perspective.