DarRahl Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 This is my first try.Pleaze give comments and a rating so i can improve myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Pic Could Be Better Effect is OKOP'ed6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarRahl Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 thanks for comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 thanks for comment It's OK i like commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Ok a bit comfusing,ill try to fix it's effect.However,someone else will have an better way of fixing it I just know it. "When this card is tribute summoned sucessfully,it is summoned to your Opponants side of the field.During each of your Standby Phase,destroy 1 monster the controler of this card controls.When you cannot destroy a monster during your Standby Phase,destroy this card.This card cannot be tributed". I know it can be improved and now more things. The T in temptation should be capped if the v in vampire is.This won't effect my rating. Bucket killer is correct about the picture. Balenced from 4 things,what is quite good. I thought vampires whould be put in the zombie type,even though what I said might not make sense to you since vampires are a different kind of undead.However, yugioh makers always put vampires as zombies. Time for rating,hmm lets see. 7/10 [spoiler=skills]Lets see you did do good for a new member. You did some great balencing. However,for improvement you can double check your work for any little mistakes.You possible do double check your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarRahl Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 thad of the zombie type i didn't know.And aboud the effect if i just say thad "this card cannot be tributed" it gets OP'ed becous then you can't tributed it even for Macic ore trap effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Some ocg errors, pic could be better but i think this card is balanced. Overall a good card for a new member (7/10 now. if you fix ocg and pic i give it 8.5/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarRahl Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 I will start looking for a new pic ^^ thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Life Forest Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Hi, I'm Life Forest. This is my first ever post here. I just found this site yesterday at night, so, I joined now.I think your will be the first card I will rate here.First of all, I'm still learning about OCG, so, I have no idea if yours is right or wrong. And, if it's wrong, I would not know how to fix. But it looks ok.Picture? Nice. Though, I am a YGO player, and I would have never imaginated a card with this picture, because it doesn't look like a "monster". It also doesn't look like a vampire, but... whatever, it is cool.I might be wrong, but I actually don't see it as a useful card; I mean, you Summon it to your opponent's field. It's destroyed if you don't tribute 1 monster you control each turn. And its stats are too low for the Lv, I think. It also cannot be used to a Tribute Summon. lol? For me, you got only bad effects.But, this is just my first post; my rate may be as well very bad.I guess that it would be a 5/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarRahl Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 the tribute of a monster is for the owner of the monster ^^, my oponend.The stats are low becose its summend on my oponends field.but thanks for the opinion ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Life Forest Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Oh, now it makes sense for me. I'm sorry, I just misunderstood it ^^.I guess I'll increase my rate to 7.5/10.Also, nice new picture ^^. Edit: You forgot to capitalizate Zombie on the type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarRahl Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 oke ^^ thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 from the text this appears to do more harm to you than good stays on your opponent's side of the field, you have to lose a monster each turn yes zombies like being in the graveyard, but still 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarRahl Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 from the text this appears to do more harm to you than good stays on your opponent's side of the field' date=' you have to lose a monster each turn yes zombies like being in the graveyard, but still 7.9/10[/quote'] The cost of a monster every turn is for the monsters owner in my cards case my oponent owns It so he has to pay the cost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drawmaster Duelist Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 GREAT! guy! it's real good...no, it PERFECT for new member! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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