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Chaos Lord of War- my first card


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Pic seems ok, but the border just ruins it =/.

I think I can fix the OCG:

"When this card battles a LIGHT monster, increase its ATK by 200." - Maybe my first right fix!

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lol, not the most creative effect, really, but my first card had a terrible effect, so .. ^^'

Not bad at all, but it looks OP'd. I think that you should increase the Level.

 

EDIT: lol, always forgot the rate: 7/10.

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The OCG could use improvement and the effect is real vague; you can expand on the effect to make it more useful. Try to crop the picture since I can see the black borderlines on the sides of the card and it'll help bring out the appearance of the card more. For a starter at this, it's alright but from a advanced member's perspective, it requires a lot of improvement. Try looking at other people's card and understand how they make their cards sufficient enough to gain a great grading. Also, try to improve your OCG. 5/10

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