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[align=center]Well this is my latest attempt. Please note that; Although comments such as "I like it :)" are accepted and I thank you for taht, however, It won't help me get any better, so I urge you to at least comment on something about the tag you like or dislike. Thank you, and enjoy.

 

 

V.1

 

Sherlock.png

 

V.2

 

Sherlock-2.png

 

 

 

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Not so great..

There is no flow and no depth. Effects are very random' date=' too.

Effects shud fit the focal.

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I agree with the flow and depth part, now taht I look at it, the tag lacks both, I think taht is my biggest problem when it comes to making tags. Thnx though.

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Not so great..

There is no flow and no depth. Effects are very random' date=' too.

Effects shud fit the focal.

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I agree with the flow and depth part, now taht I look at it, the tag lacks both, I think taht is my biggest problem when it comes to making tags. Thnx though.

 

as long as you pay close attention to wht you're doing, and you know wht to do, flow and depth are not hard to use

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Not so great..

There is no flow and no depth. Effects are very random' date=' too.

Effects shud fit the focal.

[/quote']

 

I agree with the flow and depth part, now taht I look at it, the tag lacks both, I think taht is my biggest problem when it comes to making tags. Thnx though.

 

as long as you pay close attention to wht you're doing, and you know wht to do, flow and depth are not hard to use

 

Oh i see. Well then I guess its time to hit the tuts. Thnx. And just wondering am I getting any better?

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Not so great..

There is no flow and no depth. Effects are very random' date=' too.

Effects shud fit the focal.

[/quote']

 

I agree with the flow and depth part, now taht I look at it, the tag lacks both, I think taht is my biggest problem when it comes to making tags. Thnx though.

 

as long as you pay close attention to wht you're doing, and you know wht to do, flow and depth are not hard to use

 

Oh i see. Well then I guess its time to hit the tuts. Good job Thnx. And just wondering am I getting any better?

 

Yes i have seen improvement in you.

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Not so great..

There is no flow and no depth. Effects are very random' date=' too.

Effects shud fit the focal.

[/quote']

 

I agree with the flow and depth part, now taht I look at it, the tag lacks both, I think taht is my biggest problem when it comes to making tags. Thnx though.

 

as long as you pay close attention to wht you're doing, and you know wht to do, flow and depth are not hard to use

 

Oh i see. Well then I guess its time to hit the tuts. Good job Thnx. And just wondering am I getting any better?

 

Yes i have seen improvement in you.

 

Thnx it means alot. (:

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You've improved. But this is mono but I still quite like it.

 

Thnx man. Yeah I was half way into the tag, and I go "wait... this is mono" so i tried changing it to complementary, but I liked it better the way it was.

 

Edit: Added another version.

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Hmm.... I like it. However, did you want Mr. Holmes to be the focal point? Because if so, then you might want to do a few things. First off, try to make him "pop" from the background (this can be done by either increasing the contrast or exposing the image more with shadows or highlights. A monochrome image sometimes can be very moving and effective, but in this case it's a bit distracting from Sherlock himself. Also, try to get rid of the amount of space to the right of the image. The artistic principle of space determines how well a person's eye will go across the image. In this case, because the right side is darker, our eyes tend to got that way. So, try to either place Sherlock in the middle of the image, or else cut the right end of the image out.

 

Hope I was helpful.

 

~Aya~

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Hmm.... I like it. However' date=' did you want Mr. Holmes to be the focal point? Because if so, then you might want to do a few things. First off, try to make him "pop" from the background (this can be done by either increasing the contrast or exposing the image more with shadows or highlights. A monochrome image sometimes can be very moving and effective, but in this case it's a bit distracting from Sherlock himself. Also, try to get rid of the amount of space to the right of the image. The artistic principle of space determines how well a person's eye will go across the image. In this case, because the right side is darker, our eyes tend to got that way. So, try to either place Sherlock in the middle of the image, or else cut the right end of the image out.

 

Hope I was helpful.

 

~Aya~

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hmm, I see what your saying. It makes sense though i do not agree with cropping it off. Though if it would hlelp i guess i'll give it a shot. Thnx though. More CnC please! Actually starting to get this stuff. xD

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Seems cool. Flow is decent but depth needs slight work. Lighting is good from what I see' date=' effects seem slightly random, but otherwise, nice :D

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Thanks man. And where you been? you weren't on yesterday right?

 

I was, just about posted and then I had to go somewhere D:

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Seems cool. Flow is decent but depth needs slight work. Lighting is good from what I see' date=' effects seem slightly random, but otherwise, nice :D

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Thanks man. And where you been? you weren't on yesterday right?

 

I was, just about posted and then I had to go somewhere D:

 

Ohh lol i see, well anyone else care to CnC?

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EHN' date=' please do stop trying to CnC. Or at least become better before you do. All you say is BS. Also, this is rather bad. IMO, a bit better than your other one, but meh... You have lighting and flow, but said basics are bad.

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Thnx. And welcome back.

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Actually' date=' I think it's not half bad.

If you'd make the colors less monotone and add some more color variations, work on the depth and fill up the left empty space and tune down the brightness, it might actually look pretty good.

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Thnx at least someone kind of likes it. But I'll work on it. =]

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Actually' date=' I think it's not half bad.

If you'd make the colors less monotone and add some more color variations, work on the depth and fill up the left empty space and tune down the brightness, it might actually look pretty good.

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Thnx at least someone kind of likes it. But I'll work on it. =]

 

 

Well, duh!

It's got friggin' Holmes in it!

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Actually' date=' I think it's not half bad.

If you'd make the colors less monotone and add some more color variations, work on the depth and fill up the left empty space and tune down the brightness, it might actually look pretty good.

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Thnx at least someone kind of likes it. But I'll work on it. =]

 

Well, duh!

It's got friggin' Holmes in it!

 

Lol. Like obviously. Working on another tag atm.

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