skullbook Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Enjoy! What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Clan Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Uh-Oh Fake Types arn't aloud sense this is the relistic card section it's Fiend not Demon so if you change that and repost you wont get flammed if not this belongs in Any-Other card Section So next time please read the ruels before posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skullbook Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Uh-Oh Fake Types arn't aloud sense this is the relistic card section it's Fiend not Demon so if you change that and repost you wont get flammed if not this belongs in Any-Other card Section So next time please read the ruels before posting Ow didnt know wel i remade now so maybe this is better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Clan Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Alright i'll now correct your OCG lolDemon Boy - When this card is Summoned you can Special Summon one "Demon Girl" from your hand. While there is a face-up "Demon Girl" on your side of the field this card can attack your opponent directly.I would add a Cost to either it Attacking directly or Summoning demon Girl Shadow of Darkness - While this card is equiped to a DARK monster that monster can attack your opponent directly. When this card is removed from the field destroy the equiped monster.I would add a Drawback to it like then you take damage equal to its ATK or something Revenge of the Demon - Activate only when a Fiend-Type monster is destroyed as a result of battle. Destroy the monster that destroyed it and inflict damage to your opponent equal to it's ATK.I would say Half the ATK insead of all of it so that way it's less OPed (Overpowerd) Contract with the Underworld - Discard 2 cards. Special Summon one DARK monster from your Graveyard.I would add a Restriction like 1 Level 4 or Lower monster or a monster with 2000 or less ATK Demon Girl - While you control another monster your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. As long as this card remains face-up on the field increase the ATK of all Fiend-Type monsters by 400.I would say this is OKay Zeratos the Demon - When this card is Summoned you can Special Summon one Fiend-Type moster with an ATK of 1800 or less from your Graveyard. This card gains 400 ATK for each Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard.This is Okay as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Demon isn't a real type, make it Fiend instead Boo Clan already pointed out the OCG errors, which there were plenty Zeratos is the only one too OPed for such special summoning since there's no restrictions on it. Pic also should have a background as well 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drawmaster Duelist Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 It's GREAT!!! I don't belive you're new member! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skullbook Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 It's GREAT!!! I don't belive you're new member! Thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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