Deejai Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Clan Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 No UPed alot lol and bad OCG but i'll fix it real fast just some rewordingThis card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is Summoned you take 1500 Life Points for each card in your hand. Remove this card during the End Phase of your turn. Not bad for a First card i guess 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobrarat Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 No offense but why would you use a card that inflicts 3000 damage for every card in your hand, to your own life points! That's suicide! And i think your OCG is not completely right but you should ask the opinion of pro's about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brimtosis Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 OMG. You could die if you had 3 or more cards in your hand. Lower the self inflicted burn. And work on your OCG. But, for a first card, you've got the idea.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deejai Posted February 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 the point is to have few to no cards in your hand. its more of a backup card and it justifies having 3000 atk on a lv4. I dont know the OCG format exactly so i guess ill brush up on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Even with that point, you're likely to deal at the very least 3000 damage to yourself if you have just one card. You'd be blowing out almost half of your own Life Points. I'd take off a 0.Skill Drain makes this pretty good too. Not a bad attempt, but it's suicide right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Too overpowered and yet too pathetic. 6/10 [spoiler=improvement]Sort out the effect I would say and try to make sense.Give it 110%. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Life Forest Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 What were you thinking of when you made this card? Even having 1 card in your hand you would lose almost all your Life Points! And, usually, you have more than 1 card in your hand. The only good thing on your card is the pic, seriously. I agree with Zeonark, Skill Drain works well with it, but... Really, right now it's a suicide card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Clan Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Yo People stop dissin on the new kid ight? he's new and non skilled but he'll get there please have nice comments about it and HELP him/Her in card making don't sit there and say he sucks he needs time to get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Life Forest Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Who said he sucks? As I saw, everyone gave constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Nobody did. Total suicide card really, agree'd with members above. OCG fix - This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When you Normal Summon this card, you lose Life Points equal to the number of cards in your hand x3000. During the End Phase, remove this card from play. The image isn't YGO-ish. I recommend ALL realistic card makers to NEVER put stuff in the circulation other than the edition of the card. Don't put image credit or something like that. Even with 3000 ATK, it's still underpowered. I suggest to try this effect (might by sh!tty, I'm not very good at effects, balance could be worse.) - This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. During the turn you Normal Summoned this card, while this card remains face-up in Defense Position, inflict 300 damage to your opponent each time a card is sent to the Graveyard. ATK - 1500 / DEF - 200 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 may not=cannotuppercase any type of summon, like Special Summon, Summon, and also Set and End Phaseseems kinda UPed, i understand it's a quick way to use a 3000 aTK monster but.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Boo Clan already corrected the OCG and 3000 LP burn per card in your hand? That'll kill you. I'd lower it to 1000-1500 burn per card in your hand, THEN the 3000 ATK for lv4 will be reasonable 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Its self-inflict effect is much too high and considering it dies at the endphase, not worth it. Either reduce the self-burn or remove that last part... and reduce the self-burn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 OMG. You could die if you had 3 or more cards in your hand. Lower the self inflicted burn. And work on your OCG. Ya, for a cost that big, why remove it from play at the End Phase? 7-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 Fix your OCG OP'ed for sure Meh Pic 4.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overlord76 Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 I could find uses for that, but its really not practical. More like suicidal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted February 24, 2010 Report Share Posted February 24, 2010 I can see this being used with Barrel Behind the Door for an OTK ( http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Barrel_Behind_the_Door ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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