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[Dr. Percival Cox]

Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK monsters. By tributing one DARK monster from the feild you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to 500x that monsters level. While there is a DARK attribute monster on the feild,if this card would be destroyed by an effect, destroy that monster instead.

[jayjack]

Bit oped, 7/10

Correct OCG

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by 2 DARK monsters you control from play. You can Tribute 1 DARK monster to inflict damage to your opponent equal to its Level x 500. While there is a face-up DARK monster on the field, if this card is destroyed, destroy that monster instead.

[starwarrior506]

hi good card

[Guest Neo Fusion]

minor errors, fixed lore below

Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK monsters. By Tributing 1 DARK monster from the field, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to 500 x the Tributed monster's Level. While there is a DARK monster on the field, if this card would be destroyed by a card effect, destroy that monster instead.

[Where are my COOKIES]

Ya, you misspelled field. It's not "feild" it's "field".

 

8-10

[ragnarok1945]

tributing should be Tributing

 

just say DARK monster, there's no need for the "attribute" after DARK

 

last effect you need to limit it to only once per turn or it'll be OPed

 

7.2/10