Blackwing Support >.>;(Corrected)

[grandprix1]

I play a Harpie/Winged Beast deck and might soon be upgrading to a Blackwing deck.I really dont wanna part with the harpie ladys so i came up with this idea,thought it might be a cool card,any helpful criticism is appreciated :)(EDIT:Should make sense now,i decided to take away the Non-accumulating thing cause it was just confusing and wouldnt have made any sense anyway.Decided to add swallow's nest to the effect activation to give the card a little more flexibility cause really every blackwing deck should run at least 2 swallows nest,its an amazing card to pull off OTK's xD.Anyway thanks to the people that gave me tips on fixing this,especially Phanax Leminer who gave me the outline for rewriting it ^^;)

 

 

If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Blackwing" card or "Swallow's Nest", you can select and activate 1 of these effects:

-As long as this card is face-up on the field, all DARK monsters gain 300 ATK.

-As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any "Blackwing" monsters that battles a face-down Defense Position monster destroys it immediately without applying damage calculation.

-As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any monster that destroys a "Blackwing" monster by battle cannot declare an attack for 2 of your turns.

[Guest Neo Fusion]

wat do u mean by accumulate?

one=1

Attack points=ATK

Defense position=Defense Position

put a comma after every side of the field

instantly destroys needs to be rephrased tho i dnt knw how

this is a great card for a new member tho

[grandprix1]

By accumulate i mean if the card is special summoned multiple times the effects cant stack.

 

And yea i was going by the Mystic Swordsman effect for the second one,and it reads "If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation" so your right,it should be changed to that.

 

Thanks though :)

[Phanax Leminer]

Aiku: Evil Harpy lady!

 

OCG:

If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Blackwing" card, you can select and activate 1 of these effects (You must choose a different effect if you control another "Blackwing-Harpie Lady"):

-As long as this card is face-up on the field, all DARK monsters gain 300 ATK.

-As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any "Blackwing" monsters that battle a face-down Defense Position monster destroy it immeadiately without applying damage calculation.

-As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any monsterd that destroy a "Blackwing" monster by battle cannot declare an attack for 2 turns.

(Can contient errors and mistakes...)

 

Effect: It does remind me of the multiples effect of the harpy lady effect. A quiet interresting combo and it respect the theme of the Harpy Ladies and the Blackwing.

 

Image and Name: Everything is in order.

 

Overall: 7.6/10

[grandprix1]

Def worded it better then me,ill make those corrections ^.^

thanks for the help :)

[ubermetaknight]

A pretty good card 9/10

[Drawmaster Duelist]

WOW. It like a Harpie lady's zombie!!! I like it.

[grandprix1]

I know,it looks like a witch from L4D with wings xD i love it

[MibeR]

yeah,,not too bad.. but your effect is too much great for you.

[grandprix1]

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how so?

[ragnarok1945]

finally a NON-Uped Harpy Lady

 

the OCG correction is up already. The balance is there, a shame this can't work well in a harpy deck though

 

7.7/10

[grandprix1]

Bump :)

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Aiku: Evil Harpy lady!

 

But if it was named that, it wouldn't count as a Blackwing.

[grandprix1]

BUMP! :D