Hartley Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Divine Phoenix Dragon "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card attacks, destroy this card after damage calculation. If this card is destroyed by it's own effect, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase." Image = http://w7.funformobile.com/blog/profile.php?uid=jg27f1hyyn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 opponents=opponent's, life points=Life Points, special summon=Special Summon, stand by phase=Standby Phase, grave yard= Graveyard. Where is the Tuner, Non-Tuner thing? 8-10 not bad for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 u need to specify the synchro material and what Cookies said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 A) Not a SynchroB) Your OCG is badC) Overpowering. Incredibly overpowering. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Not a synchro? How is this not a synchro? And OCG is bad? I'm afriad I don't quite know what you're talking about. Any tuner will do, as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Synchro Materials needed:Like: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters And, um, Overpowered? LOLDIRECTLOLDESTROYEDLOLSTANDBYPHASELOLREVIVE The drawback is that it only happens your Standby Phase. Hmm... Well it doesn't come back like Stardust, so I'm not sure. This could be balanced. I'm just probably not looking at it right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Oh yeah forgot to add the tuner + blah blah. I brought the atk down to 2000, too. I think that is reasonable, considering some of the crazy effects of most synchro monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Ah. Didn't notice you were new. Sorry OCG is Official Card Grammar. It's not totally important but it makes things easier. I'm good at fixing OCG if you want a fix. As to how it isn't a synchro, Synchro monsters have the "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner" in their effect. go to www.yugioh.wikia.com and search Stardust Dragon then look at it's effect. That what the structure of a Synchro monster's effect looks like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Sure, if you don't mind fixing the grammar. That would be awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grandprix1 Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Im seeing the edited version now,so i obviously cant give my opnion on what it was. Badass Pic,The effect could be a little OP considering once its out your opponent has 4 turns to destroy it during your turn or remove it before losing,but i like it :)8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ubermetaknight Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 The picture is pretty good but your effect is way OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Now I'm looking at the stats and it's quite Underpowered for a Level 8 Synchro. I'd shave off a level or bounce it back to 2500. I think it was fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 i just see, that the pics i've ever see in somewhere in this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 You should make it halven its ATK while direct attacking, and I will give you a 10/10 with newby bonus. Since it's not the case 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 that pic is overused too often now even though it only has 2000 atk, letting it keep coming back for more direct attacks makes it OPed. You should said the battle damage is halved if you're going to attack your opponent directly with it 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Other people use that pic? D@mn it! I tried to find something new....Anyways, here's what I'm thinking: bump up atk to 3000, and give the OPTION to direct attack, but if you do, it looses half it's atk and gets destroyed. You then discard 1 card from your hand to special summon it on your next turn at main phase 2. Fair enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Pic os OU, but I will forgive becouse you're new.OCG is fixed.It's revive ability makes it wickedly OP. It should be changed.Name is boring.A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 What about what I suggested for the updated effect? What do you suggest for a name? I like the "phoenix dragon" part of it, but I thought it needed something before or after it, so I choice divine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Maybe something like............. Name is fine.For the effect, I wouldn't know anything at the moment. But that's the beauty of cardmaking, letting your imagination loose on you own cards. So good luck with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mjs best Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 cool card and good pic but the effect is confusing8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 OP'ed OCG is meh Pic is overused 5.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 25, 2010 Report Share Posted February 25, 2010 Other people use that pic? D@mn it! I tried to find something new....Anyways' date=' here's what I'm thinking: bump up atk to 3000, and give the OPTION to direct attack, but if you do, it looses half it's atk and gets destroyed. You then discard 1 card from your hand to special summon it on your next turn at main phase 2. Fair enough?[/quote'] Cards with Direct Attack effects are always optional.I'd just bounce to ATK back to normal. Seeing how it's like Stardust, it's fine really. Which I just noticed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 Before, I made it so that it MUST attack directly. And thanks for the imput everyone, although I think only me and Zeonark think this card is fair lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 With the current Meta, it'll probably be stopped before it does any real harm. And there are better options for Lv8 Synchro anyways so it's quite balanced IMO. 8.5/10 OP'ed OCG is meh Pic is overused 5.4/10 YAY FOR CONTRIBUTING ABSOLUTELY NOTHING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hartley Posted February 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 ^ lol thank you for saying it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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