Angel (Series) Cards

[Lucciola]

Okay I don't know if anyone's done these before and if they have then oh well because I wanted to do it and I thought it'd be fun to see what everyone thinks, and if there's any errors please do point them out and I'll fix them promptly and I'll admit that a couple of pictures aren't all that great but I did what I could while trying not to use real life images.

 

 

 

 

 

I wasn't sure about the last couple in the way of their effects and Angel and Spike maybe a bit too powerful but I'd like to hear what the populace thinks?

[LiAM]

There are a lot of Fake Types (usually fake types go in AoC).

Some cards seem a bit too powerful on the basis of effect, and your OCG is lacking authenticity.

Also not familiar with this film/ comic/ cartoon or whatever it is, lol xD

 

Overall, a good attempt, fixing your mistakes will help improve your cards.

 

I'll lend you this quick OCG sheet I designed a few months ago ;)

 

Some OCG fixes you might find useful:

normal summon = Normal Summon

special summon = Special Summon

spell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Card

monster effect card = monster Effect card

graveyard = Graveyard

deck = Deck

hand = hand

Field = field

atk/ def = ATK/ DEF

ATK points = ATK

remove ___ from play = remove from play ___

a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monster

opponents side of the field = opponent controls

your side of the field = you control

tribute = Tribute

level stars = Level

every = each

life points = Life Points

light/ dark = LIGHT/ DARK

warrior type = Warrior-Type

choose = select

???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEF

as a result of battle = by battle

one/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...

attack mode = Attack Position

his/ her = they/ their

may = can

face up = face-up

attribute = Attribute

type = Type

ritual = Ritual

monster card zone = Monster Card Zone