Some Cards From My New Deck

[Flexh]

Hello,

These are my cards and i hope you like :-D

Please tell me how i can improve so i have a good deck

This Thread Will eventually have the whole deck in so say the card and explain the good and bad points about it

 

[spoiler=Traps]

[spoiler=Devastation]

 

[spoiler=Dragon Slayer]

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

[spoiler=Angel Assitance]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Monsters]

[spoiler=Backfire Wizard]

 

[spoiler=Dragon Girl Dark]

 

[spoiler=The Copying Mask]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I do NOT own any of the artwork it is from Deviant Art

[dilous]

cool cards by the way is the competition still on?

[ragnarok1945]

Angel Assistance's effect is way too bland, give it another one

 

Devastation's effect is too powerful. Draw power AND monster removal? At the very least remove one of the two

 

Wizard isn't a real type, change it to Spellcaster

 

Girl is also not a real type

 

7/10

[Flexh]

Angel Assistance's effect is way too bland' date=' give it another one

 

Devastation's effect is too powerful. Draw power AND monster removal? At the very least remove one of the two

 

Wizard isn't a real type, change it to Spellcaster

 

Girl is also not a real type

 

7/10

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Yes Thank You I will Update them Later

And Dilious Yes It Is

[PenguinZ]

7/10. spaceerors and i little bad OCG.

[Flexh]

Yes I am going to fix that

[Boo Clan]

Wow for as high level as you are i expected better you need to Space after , . and capitize Summoning things like Normal Summon Special Summon ect. yeah you could have used a better effort no offense but 6/10

[Overlord Lucan]

Devastation is Incredibly OP with a 3 card drawing ability along with monster removal.

 

I'm confused by Dragon Slayer and its OCG is wrong, but if Im reading this right your opponent attacks with a 3000 monster attacking a 1000 defense position monster you activated this and he takes the 2000 point diffirence? If thats the case then its ok, but worthless to run as Magic Cylinder is this without theability to use it when you attack the opponent, so its a power/utility ratio between the 2 cards.

 

Angel Assistance is boring, and pretty much useless

 

Backfire Wizard is a fake-type, also Im not sure a monsters ability can activate when its set, you might want to change that to when its Flip-summoned. The effect that has to do with what you draw is almost balanced, but the insanely powerful first effect isn't balanced out by ethier of the other effects, the worst that can happen is oops you lost a 4 star 1600 ATK monster, not a big deal.

 

Dragon Girl-Dark Girl is not a type, also you miss spelled Life. Im a bit confused with the effect as the OCG is very off. This card is pretty OP as no matter how it is destroyed you get a huge benefit

 

Again for Copy mask Girl is not a type also this is pretty much copy cat, heres (Mostly) the correct OCG: When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster your on the field. This card's ATK and DEF become equal to the selected monster's ATK and DEF.

[Hass Mac]

cool cards and nice traps but i think devastation is a bit too powerful and for the rest you have some OGC errors

8.9/10