[Overlord Lucan (Like Anyone cares)] Mage of Dark Sorcery

[Overlord Lucan]

Hello YCM,

 

I present to you my most humble card in the hope you can ridicule me for it being an OP wreck.

 

[spoiler=Effect]When this card is summoned You can Special Summon 2 "Servant of the Dark Mage" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 400/DEF 400). Once per turn you can select and activate one of the following effects:

- Tribute 1 "Servant of the Dark Mage" to destroy 1 card on the field.

-Tribute 2 tokens on the field to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent.

-Tribute 2 "Servant of the Dark Mage" tokens to summon 3 "Servant of the Dark Mage" Tokens.

As long as there is 1 "Servant of the Dark Mage" token on the field this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle (Damage Calculation applied normally.) When this card is removed from the field all "Servant of the Dark Mage" tokens are destroyed.

 

[image Credit -- Wanderley]

 

I was thinking of possibly adding a Life point cost to the ability to summon more tokens. Anyway thoughts on the card?

[ragnarok1945]

for the 3 token summon effect, you'll need to put restrictions of them as well

 

other than that though all the other effects look fine, and so is the OCG

 

9.5/10

[Overlord Lucan]

Thanks for the rating, Im not to sure about adding any costs to the token summoning, if you can explain why you think I should I add a cost please explain and Ill consider it.

[<}Alpha Frogodile{>]

Great. creative effect. 9.6/10

[Overlord Lucan]

Thanks for the rating, problems with the card? Ocg errors? Anything you find OP?

[Guest Neo Fusion]

minor errors, fixed lore below if u want it

When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 2 "Servant of the Dark Mage"s (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 400/DEF 400). Once per turn, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:

-Tribute 1 "Servant of the Dark Mage" to destroy 1 card on the field.

-Tribute 2 Tokens on the field to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent.

-Tribute 2 "Servant of the Dark Mage" Tokens to Special Summon 3 "Servant of the Dark Mage" Tokens.

As long as there is 1 "Servant of the Dark Mage" Token on the field, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. (Damage calculation applied normally.) When this card is removed from the field, all "Servant of the Dark Mage" Tokens are destroyed.

[The-Wick!]

perfect effect, but kinda Oped don't you think?

 

8.9/10

[Overlord Lucan]

perfect effect' date=' but kinda Oped don't you think?

 

8.9/10

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First off Im confused how it can be perfect and OP, but anyway explain how its OP. Also thanks for the OCG fix FusionXD Ill change it in a bit.

[The-Wick!]

I mean, its like this:

this card cannot be destroyed easily and it's to easy to summon. Maybe you could change some of the tokens effects, because you could actualy make your opponent lose 1000 Life Points every 2 turns, and with a card that makes your opponent cannot use spell or trap cards, is invencible and still take a BIG damage to the opponent. Its perfect because its a nice effect =D

[Overlord Lucan]

How would you make them lose 1000 every 2 turns? Do you mean something like Summon 1 Token

[kemren_18]

well overused pics..and a confusing effects..

 

ill rate 7/10..for a good effeort.

[Overlord Lucan]

Bump

[Cardmakermaster12345]

love the pic

OCG good

Effect balanced

8.5/10

Great Overall