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Self Drawn[Delano] Burning Demon


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if you want to see the original image just say so(the orginal was made on a 1680x1080px document)

 

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[spoiler=lore]You can Special Summon this card by removing 2 FIRE monsters you control from play. If this card is Summoned in this way, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined Levels of the removed monsters x 200. Then, inflict Life Points equal to half the damage your opponent took. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower FIRE monster from your hand or Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. If you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the summoned monster's original ATK and inflict damage to your Life Points equal to half the summoned monster's original DEF.

 

 

 

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[spoiler=lore]You can Special Summon this card by removing 2 FIRE monsters you control from play. If this card is Summoned in this way, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined Levels of the removed monsters x 200. Then, inflict Life Points equal to half the damage your opponent took. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower FIRE monster from your hand or Graveyard in face-up Attack Position that monster cannot attack and its effect is negated until the 3rd Standby Phase after it was Summoned . If you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the Summoned monster's original ATK and inflict damage to your Life Points equal to half the Summoned monster's original DEF.

 

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and why are you people not saying what part of it is OP'd because it does not help if you just say "O its Op'd -insert rating-" seriously that does not help in any way shape or form. And this is 1 of the 1st Op'd cards i have made in a while normally they are balanced i just felt like doing something i don't normally do. And another thing do just assume that i'm a follower just because of 1 OP'd card i do my own thing when i make my effects and so on.

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Aiku: Burn fire, burn! AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!

 

OCG: Only one mistake

-summoned = Summoned

 

Effect: Even if the effect is Overpowered and was planned to be Overpowered, it's still cheap. Too easy to Summon and too powerful effects. Not even drawback.

 

Image and Name: I don't see a demon, I see a crazy image. See the somewhat ressemblance to a portal and a monster, but I cannot say that's a demon. Fits overall well with the effect.

 

Overall: 5.5/10[/color]

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Okay if its ment to be OP'd then

9.5/10

And I thought you couldn't fit the pick on the card?

 

i resized using a specialific size reduction tool and did not pixelate like the other i wanted to make into a card.

 

 

Aiku: Burn fire' date=' burn! AHAHAHAHAHAH!!![/color']

 

OCG: Only one mistake

-summoned = Summoned

 

Effect: Even if the effect is Overpowered and was planned to be Overpowered, it's still cheap. Too easy to Summon and too powerful effects. Not even drawback.

 

Image and Name: I don't see a demon, I see a crazy image. See the somewhat ressemblance to a portal and a monster, but I cannot say that's a demon. Fits overall well with the effect.

 

Overall: 5.5/10

 

The drawback is that the user also takes damage as well. but i'll look into one more negative effect.

 

o crap XD i missed those last Summons will fix those right away

 

 

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ok OCG errors fix'd and i added a neg effect to the monster that is summoned by his effect. Does that make it any better

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