Preview 2 - Menaced Raptor

[Gawd of Spell]

[spoiler= [b]Menaced Raptor[/b]][spoiler= [b]Lore[/b]]Once per turn the controller of this card can tribute 1 Dinosaur-type monster. Place 1 "Dino" counter on your Opponent's Life Points for each card sent to the Graveyard this way. When this card is destroyed by Battle remove all "Dino" counters from your Opponent's Life Points and inflict 300 Damage to your Opponent for each "Dino" counter removed.

 

This Card came to me while I was eating dinner. So I was right there eating a nice steak when boom! It hit me right on the nose "Ow!" I put it straight on the laptop as fast as I could. Hope you like. (RATE/HATE/COMMENT)

[Phanax Leminer]

Aiku: Let's do this! GO DINOOOOO!

 

OCG:

Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Dinosaur-Type monster. Place 1 Dino Counter on your opponent's Life Points for each card sent to the Graveyard that way (Doesn't work like this. Impossible). When this card is destroyed by battle, remove all Dino Counters from your opponent's Life Points and inflict 300 aamage to your opponent for each Dino Counters removed.

 

Effect: It's not possible to put a counter on Life Points. The efect is also very weak and can be easily avoid or planned to be avoid.

 

Image and Name: Fit well.

 

Overall: 4.6/10

[Gawd of Spell]

I put the counters on Life Points to be original that's all. If you don't like it it's just something Neww I'm trying to do

[ragnarok1945]

Dinosaur-type should be Dinosaur-Type

 

tribute should be Tribute

 

you can't put counters on a player's LP. The burn effect is good, but too easily avoided

 

7/10

[Gawd of Spell]

The Life point counter is to be different and original. I wanna do something no one else has ever done. Watch in the future Kazuki will make a card that puts counters on a players lifepoints.