Luna Diviner Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Well god gak made the pic and this here is the main card of my new set PDR HERE IT IS- Please rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 LoL, the background comes from "the convulsion of nature" from the card game but the pic is good and the effect is fair. i say 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Thanks dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Several grammar errors on the card, such as the abscence of a space after commas. Other than that, the OCG is a tiny bit off. The card is great, though. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 yu spelled "your" wrong and well i see a lot of errors... but the card looks cool and I know what the effect is so i give yu 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Oh sorry everyone and yeah thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Arrange the card text, it will become better. Some OCG mistakes. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 its pretty good, but some ocg mistakes and the ffect doesnt fit the name. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 The effect could be slightly, improved on, cause I know its not your best... but the pic is great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 there are a few ocg errors but it's still a good card and pic4.45/5good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Here is the improved card and something elseCheck the top because you keep on looking at the wrong card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 hmmm there should be a comma (,) after the first Deck, and it should be your not you 9/10 =) oh and Type in your second card needs to be caped 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 A lot of errors on the first one, it doesn't saywhether you send the cards from your hand,deck, or raveyard, and you could be cheating and said you drew it, although you have 3 copiesin your deck. The monster should be returned face-up to solve that problem. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 ther cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 kon have you even read the NEW effect it is completly diffrent I KNow their are grammar problems but whenever i go onthe cardmaker i get logged of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Kinda over powered, but pretty nice anyways!8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Good pics, okay effects, grammar problems. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i dunno what to make of them really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Hey everyone I have found the grammar problems when I posted them BUT when I go to the card maker to edit it ,It says I am logged of then I LOG BUT IT STILL SAY i'M LOGGED OF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 ummmm geees arrrrrr 7.5/10good job ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Here is the new one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 nice i like it ^_^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Here are my latests sorry summoner SHOULD say Machine-Type and Soldier should be level 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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